its a good read but the love drama between Harry and Susan are too over the top and actually ruining the story for me, otherwise good story.

bonne fic!

Loved it!

Chapter 10: I think your forgetting that that the rivers of Australia have crocodiles. The ocean has crocodiles to, plus sharks, box jellyfish, and other deadly creatures. Only certain beaches that have nets and other protections are considered safe.

oops, sorry, last review I meant fourteen, not thirteen

Oh come on! They are thirteen years old!

A very enjoyable story. Anna

Great story,hope to see more from you soon.

Yeah like other reviewers said this needs an epilogue to tie up the loose ends.

Not sure why this got shown as updated though as it hasn't been.

Very nice

why is this showing a update

you have to chapter 8's

I have read this about 3 or 4 times and I just now got the wright joke

This is just ridiculous. Sirius didn't go back to Grimmauld Place until after the Tournament was over and Voldie had gotten his body back. He hated that house, so why would he go and stay there by himself? Answer: he wouldn't. Dumbles didn't reform the order and ask to use Grimmauld until after the Tournament was over.

Needs an epilouge. An explanation of what happen to some of the snakes whose dad's where death eaters as well as getting the lSt horcrux and for fun Umbridge being sent through the veil after plans where found in her office to torture students who where not Snakes. I would also include something having to do with Draco being expelled from school after he finds out his parents are as poor as the Weasley family.