Will you write a sequel now that the second game is out.

I thought this story was pretty cool. I love both Life is Strange and The Last of Us so it felt so familiar but different too. I kept looking forward to how LIS characters would be put into the LIS universe. Nice job!

Well theres hope for the human race.

In about 60 years or so, Chloe will die of old age, Then they can have her brain (As odd as it sounds)

Im sure her blood would do though lol

Good mash-up I liked it a lot.

I feel bad for Kate and Rachel...And I HATE you for this...like REALLY REALLY hate you but you actually had me feeling very sorry for Victoria, Not an easy feat.

Good job

For chapter 12: Winter

I have yet to play the Last of us, So I'm not sure how that bit goes in game, (I've seen upto where they start smuggling the infected girl thats it.

That said, I found this VERY liberating (Having played LiS and being hit by the emotional wrecking ball that still gets me six months after)

Jeffershit got what he deserved...In both universes :D

I agree with every point you brought up at the end of this chapter. Your views are on point, and I respect that. Good on ya'.

I just want to say that you've wrote an incredible story ! I really love it, and i'm a bit sad that it has to end. I'm waiting for the spin off :D

I've never played TLOU (I'm a bit too chikenshit ah ah), but looked a let's play at some point. Like not even half of the game I think. And then, I had a dilemma.
- Continue the let's play, to not take any risks about spoils from your fanfic
- Or just keep reading, and well.. never mind for the game

Guess what? I was so into your universe, that I just wanted to know nothing more from the game, and be surprised. And I was !

Keep going writing, you do it great !

Oh boy...oh my dog...
Could you, maybe...not let this end? Yeah, I do look forward to read the spinoffs, (the Marshfield one, certainly), but SEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL pleeaaase!

The thing is, after I watched/played The Last of Us and Life is Strange, I still could read fanfictions to them. But what can I do after finish reading such a great fanfiction, which was an incredible adventure on it's own?
I'll just read it again, I guess ;) But not before thanking you once more for this wonderful story. As I said, it was a very unique, genuine adventure, and I'm glad I could read it.

*suddenly remembers the huge pile'o'fanfics on your profile*
Oh well, I'm off to more adventures! (No sleep for me, I guess)

*reading A/N cautiously*
Uh-hu, okay. So I'll just take like, 30 minutes to prepare myself emotionally for this chapter.
*60 minutes later*
Alright, I'm prepared for this!
*after reading the chapter*
OMG I wasn't prepared at all!

So this chapter was, uh...gwaahh, sorry, I'm still filled with hate and rage against Jeffershit, I can't even write a proper review. But I'm so freakin glad you didn't include the part with his little posse and all the...other weird shit going on in that part of the game. The backstory you gave Jeffershits charakter was very interesting and fitted him pretty well too, sick basterd that he is.

Story is pretty goddamn amazing so far, by the way. Too bad I've only got two chapters left, but I'll be hyped for the audiobooks! Stay awesome!

nawwwwwww that first chapter tho 3

Great chapter and capstone for the story! Here are some suggestions:

the inevitability. - the inevitable
settled down hear. - here
It was amazing the things a bit of sleep could do - It was amazing what a bit of sleep could do
outlook from Max. Her grip ... Max and ... in Max's ... She had hoped that Max would - TOO MUCH MAX

The ends here even though I knew was coming he still found a way surprised me impressive

The mention of the fireflies in the situation fits in a way. I don't think Marlene with that great of a leader troop wise. I mean really she lost half our troops crossing the country to get her last stronghold and I got a half slaughtered fighting in the city were at the beginning of all this

Max and Chloe moved as a commando squad and lost not one person. I think Marlene had too much of everything. The test so she flew away. People like they were replaceable parts

In the military is too busy building their own Empire. Well, knocking down the other guy actually do what needs to be done

People finding had enough I realized it's on them to survive and eventually it's on them to find a cure
let's be honest any independent colony become strong enough the people of supplies, etc.
they can eventually try for that

And having David settlement eventually joined up with warren
not just the fact you now have trade between each other and can exchange resources
by making the trade group between them. You really create a massive increase in security in the area between them. In time that action might lead to a large portion of the country. Being secure and rebuilt

First, you totally surprised me. They went to David's settlement. Probably the best spot for new
the other settlement has our favorite nerd boy who might be too easily mentioned Max is past if you will

As for Chloe and Max debating about someone finding a cure. The quite right in the immediate future. The probably is different groups of fighting fireflies, military, etc. not gonna happen

You need a lots smart people. I.e. people with medical degrees with proper equipment doing the research and odds are, the situation as of right now, it would take a while to find them
but eventually the settlements are successful enough. The ones looking for might find them

At least our two heroes are happy

Now for a little bit of the elephant in the room, so what's Nathan and Juliet and Dana's getting up to now?

The spinoffs see other relationships go hey why not, include an interesting read here and be nice see other stories of the ravaged land. Heck, you can write a sequel down the line. Max and Chloe are having another shot. Working cure or maybe one to start a family

We shall see

Ok, I've finally read this story and waiting for the last chapter.
Actually, I didn't play "The last of us", because I don't have console (maybe I will see it on youtube).
So, after all, I can say, that you are one of my favorite LiS authors here and in russian segment.
I wish you more ideas and I wish you inspiration! Good job!

I am impressed with their skill here, you will have to horse to ride

I mean almost every other group loses the horse in the winter campaign

Also impressed with the planning skills, their compatriots Los and seemed always be going from one situation to the next. The fixated and making it the fireflies they never gave much thought on what to do. After words

Our heroes here again. Smarter

As the choice is when you go. After words I vote Dave and Joyce
Warren place to be more up-and-coming but you have got to worry about Brooke. And Warren not getting a clue. It's been a few years, so we should know by now, Max prefers but sometime for someone so smart as Warren can really swim in the power of delusion.

Given the state of this world delusion is very easy to come by.

At least Max understands how things will work out Kate and her lasted, and if her and Victoria
we will make a run for it.

How she loved having both back. Course if that happened. She probably end up with both of them at the same time. Think irony

Like any journey, adventure or right for final boss fight is always that moment where have to ask , do we go on or We ended here. Is usually at that point going forward will be a lot more dangerous and you committing to a course of action, one way or another

Of course, the horse is also a liability need to hide it or worry about it. But at least they quickly plan ahead

I'm impressed. They dodge the infected in the tunnel. A better approach killed him. If they plan to come back. That way it might not be as lucky watching them

Also, why is it that always any area that's inside like tunnels, buildings whatever are always filled with infected. I think the infected are acting nocturnal in a way. They don't like daylight so they stay where it's dark

Okay have almost take back the comment that our heroes here are smarter. The crossing of the river is messed up. What a which way you look at it.

Always wondered when they get caught by the guards widely being such jerks, I mean they're not running at you with weapons and one is obviously hurt and others trying to give medical attention. So why think of them as hostile? They can think of the guards have an open policy anyone that shows up… That's not them is a bad guy

I had such hope Nathan here but in the end he took the easy route just like his counterpart Marlene

I think that's the best description I seen the run of the operating room this is the game itself

At the doctors their right to be afraid. Someone comes in and covered in blood and God knows what else
I'm to the teeth just cut for your security detail with a hot knife through butter. In all you got as a doctor smiling smiling disposition and not much else. By all means be afraid.

Of course I seriously wonder about the Dr. here threatening Max was a scalpel. She's packing serious firepower, namely guns. Doesn't the Dr. Really think he's going to win a fight with her

Under surprised. Max also gunned down the other assistance unarmed.

Course game wise. I always killed the Dr trying to stop, you always just on principle on my last time
play on brutal plus by that point I was shooting anything that moved on principle . As well.
That's just me

lol

Wow you really got me Nathan is a nice guy. Totally stuck in a corner. I explained why he escorted Max out. Only one guard. In a pretty competent one at that. He was almost hoping Max with pull off what she did. Think about it. The easiest way to deal with Max would have six guards escorted her out
to be. No way outfox that many or executor Max right after she woke up.

Come to think of it is the same thing Marlene did. The differences Marlene is when you go down for the cause, like a crazy zealot

Nathan wants a way out and beliefs is no way out. Max seems his defeat and gives him an option
as for the others that I just believe that Max killed Nathan on the way out. I mean really you have any other evidence otherwise. As I like to have the resources at this point to do a manhunt for him
once Max, Chloe and Nathan and the building and the city. They are ghosts

Max knows everyone's and placed a forced into crappy situations and with their feet to the fire. Unless we start saving those who want to help is no way things ever change.

The surprising outcome of how the epilogue will play out here, though obviously be romantic stuff between Chloe and Max. Admin finding a place to settle down and is now the third wheel Nathan with them
where is he going end up. After all this

And he find happiness in a way?

We shall see

I like how you incorporate details from the game in your story, like the nail raking. Excellent chapter.

Wow. So Victoria's Max his new partner. A few years on. And ironically they actually make a pretty good partnership. They know exactly compensate for each other's strengths and weaknesses. I wonder who
Victoria lost to hard and her and break her

I think the both hooked up with each other A moment of glory they give each other in a crappy world. I think they both struggling to realize they have something deeper each other. In a way of staying hands-off finish emotionally eventually makes some realize they can trust each other and meaning go for something deeper.

In a way Victoria and Max have a deep relationship . They could easily if they're allowed themselves spend The rest of their lives. With each other

Ironically, have one only sizes save the military are the good guys here but 5 min. in their area protection it's hard to say that. end less fashion lines if you're smart you use a ration card a little different section because he followed the rules the lucky enough to survive or fine alternative sources

Random searches. You look the wrong way to shoot you in the head

Of course the fireflies don't look back heroic either. It like two warring warlords fighting over the last working factory. The rest of us are caught in the middle

Interesting flashback of how Max found Victoria again. Now they learn to get along. Let's be honest. Victoria was armored up back in school special promotions in which he dealt with people. But we all knew of her and Max could talk it out of the mouth. Learn to trust each other it would get along well

Of course, the reason why Victoria asked the way he did no longer exists after the world went to crap
as the difficulty trusting and being on guard and was like that now it's kind of survival trait. You need

Making a feeling between Max and Victoria should download portable when it comes to physical release
the for loop or the purest things they can do for enjoyment you feel happiness in life. Given the world.
I have a feeling way Max is right now she could drag Victoria often some cabin up in the mountains
would only thing have to do all days explore each other both be happy. Shame nothing like that exists anymore

Also, hats off seeing Taylor and Courtney made it through. I mean I can understand Taylor. She probably got mad skills but Courtney I had two the one on odds. She wondered made out of Blackwell she seemed to
two out of it. I do predict it Hayden most of the rest of vortex club had long since dead

It's a shame won't see anymore of them. If Courtney and Taylor are living in a building in the military zone. Odds are After this brief cameo will never see them again. The lease we know this world will have some form of ending

I'm more impressed at the end here Victoria can still find cashmere in this world. I mean really
I mean cashmere not exactly the most durable survival outfit. This hundreds of ways. If you get messed up here not like this dry cleaners ground either

It is not an endless supply of new cashmere find as well. Surprise you don't get something tougher like
bomber jacket or something made of leather

We shall see