Wow, read it all in one day, and I loved it. Not only the story but it's really well written, I hope you write more!

Man, I’ve read a LOT of fanfiction in the past 7 years, and this is honestly one of the best I’ve ever read. This story is so well written.
-It’s paced perfectly
-great humor
-very few grammar mistakes
-great Jori banter
-no one was out of character
-No awkward self-insert characters/you didn’t force your own personal music taste or other interests onto any of the characters (Loved that Jade was shocked that Carla was doing that to Tori)
-you didn’t write out every single little monotonous detail like brushing their teeth and stuff like that
-I genuinely laughed out loud almost every chapter
-you didn’t overdo it on the angst
-practically no filler. pretty much every scene drove the plot forward or built up Tori and Jade’s relationship
-loved that you wrote the whole thing in third person but would kind of write more from Tori or Jade’s perspective at different points

The list of things I love about this story just goes on and on. I would 10/10 buy this book if you changed the names and published it. I can’t believe this only has like 300 favorites. It’s an absolute travesty.

You really nailed the Tori and Jade banter here. This story is criminally underrated.

Omg, this was/is all kinds of amazing. Thank you for posting. I haven’t laughed so hard in such a long time. Such an amazing story!

This story is tempting me to watch victorious

I know it’s been a long time, and you may never see this, but I just really wanted to say how much I loved this Jori fanfic. Possibly one of the best I’ve ever read. You are a great writer, and I’m now going to look through your page and hope to find something just as good. Thank you for the time and heart you put into this. It was greatly appreciated. :)

I know I'm late to the party. I just want you to know how much I enjoyed reading the story. It's very humurous and enjoyable all together. Jori for life. :D

I really loved the humor in this story. It's so we'll written. Thanks for the story.

finally finished reading this and its a great story

I’m sobbing, I love them so much ️️️

This has got to be one of my favourite stories I've read. Totally my sense of humour.

This fanfic was like reading an actual story where you really get in depth with the character and their thoughts and it was so brilliantly written that I have just fallen in love with you, author! Well done! Nothing was overdone at all, it wasn't rushed, it was paced perfectly, grammar and punctuation was the best I've seen with any story so far (I've been reading since halfway through 2014) and it was just all round a bunch of realistic Jori goodness.

Thank you for writing this, author! I most certainly didn't waste my time with this one.

I enjoyed this story a lot. And to end with one of my fave sayings almost is perfect "The saying is sealed with a Glasgow Kiss (from a song by Carter USB).

That was one perfect ending. Beck is not mad at the girls, Carla had her well-deserved dose of fear, Tori and Jade are engaged, and everything is solved nicely.

It's a good thing I've been asking you random questions about the socio-political intricacies of life in the UK so you had a chance to tell me this updated since fanfiction has been dropping the ball on notifying me apparently!

Anyway, I am glad you wrapped this one up and I will continue to hope for a rush of inspiration regarding your other unfinished works, but this was a lovely little Xmas gift.

I loved the broken cup, and wrapping up the loose ends with the friends and Carla. All the tension between Old Jade and New Jade was thoroughly entertaining as well. And of course the wonderful Jori bickering, which no one really does better than you.

Great ending. Best proposal I've seen in a Jori story - the cup & all.