Favorite part is 'screw what if' for some constructive criticism, make sure you capitalize the first letter of the first word at the beginning of your sentences. Loved the story, very poetic, keep up the good work.

OMG WHY DO I LOVE YOUR ANGST SO MUCH ? Is this even angst ? I do think so xD. That was so amazing ! Everytime I read obe of your Rinharu angst story I have that feeling in my stomach and that's just too much and I wonder how you do that everytime ... Just perfect, like all of your other stories.

Girrrl. You know I love your stuff, so I nitpick from a place of love here so I just gotta start with pointing out that your lack of capitalization at the beginning of sentences detracts from the focus on the story. GOOD WRITING STRUCTURE MATTERS, I KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER THAN THAT! Lol other than that, bravo! Lol I never tire of your HaruRin stories, you masterful queen of broken hearts yearning for one another. Amazing how you make readers get the feels so much with a simple one shot.

Also, there's an official HaruRin week? You must let me in the loop of this calendar you've found because I must participate next time around :3

Your writing does things to my heart.
My love for your writing style has no boundaries. Its so poetic and fluid, and the emphasis on certain parts and the repetition all weave themselves into your writing so smoothly. I love your writing. I am currently suffering from a blank mind and cannot think of much else to say. Thanks for sharing :)