Hi so I noticed that this story was under J. Garson and ff kinda killed the female male shepard selection, just wanted to let you know. I try to find out how to contect the admins about this

Oh god his note made me tear up!

Good work!

I’ve only started reading this fanfic and I could say your writing style has improved drastically in this chapter! 3

Love this story. Can’t wait to read more. Please continue soon.

Hey, I think you need to reload the chapter. The code got jumbled.

Damn I love this fic and your writing. I'm so sorry for how long it took me to catch up! I love the leviathan mission and I think you really did it justice! I especially really loved the little moments with Shepard & kaidan!

Amazing work!

The Leviathan DLC is my favorite in the game, and you're doing a great job with it. Can't wait to read the rest.

I've spent every free moment I have had reading this story. I love the additions you've made to the canon story line.

I really like how you're covering the story so far. The beginning of ME1 can be compelling if told well and you're definitely doing that!

I love that you switched between Shepard and Kaidan's POV. Another great chapter!

Really good first chapter! I'm looking forward to continuing.

BRILLIANT! You're a master fic writer madam, and this chapter proves it! First of all, I loved that you had Garrus win the bottle shooting contest fair and square. That was a touch of brilliance and Shepard's snark afterwards was amazing! Oh my gosh - and ninja Chakwas at the start? Amazing! I was almost in tears with laughter!

And her date with Kaidan! Wow! Beautiful! Sexy! Emotional! Your write their connection in a perfect and soul deep way! I loved every moment of it. Their devotion to each other is beautiful. This was a great chapter!

Dammit woman! You made me cry again! Legion's death always does, but this was so emotional and beautifully written that I teared up more than normal. Well done!

I loved the changes in this chapter. Especially with Kaidan going back to help Shepard in the fight against the reaper and using that strong shield. Wow! Talk about a breathless moment! It was an *amazing* moment too. Very full of feeling!

Amazing job! :)

Sorry it took me so long to R&R this chapter! It was brilliant and your wrote the geth so well I actually cried a little at the injustices done to them. The descriptions were just beautiful and the emotions Shepard experienced as she was watching the memory /data fragments was ... wow! You're writing has really grown. This was amazing.

The little snippets with kaidan were the icing on the cake. They're so in love! :) awesome chapter!

Nice chapter! Especially how Shepard is angry regarding the intel about Thessia, she has every right to be furious. Looking forward to more :D

That what make no sense a cop investigating a black ops agent when almost everything the agent does is classified or not on record how the hell is he sepected to find anything it like a normal cop told to investigate a black ops soldier he not going to get anything.