This is such a moving plot playing with my emotions and it’s just a really good story omg

This is such a cute story and I love Virgo haha

Aaahh, and so we've reached the end. It's definitely been a fun ride from start to finish! I loved seeing how Natsu and Lucy's relationship developed over the years, as well as seeing how all their other friendships still held throughout the entire time too.

Natsu proposing to Lucy in the same place they met is quite thoughtful haha. Must've brought back so much nostalgia for them, the place where it all began and now, the place where a new adventure was able to begin!

And as for characterization, I think you did great! The POV didn't feel unnatural at all, and you've written the characters and their interactions really well!

There's something I've been a little curious about though-is this Natsu related to Zeref in Measures at all, or are their last names just pure coincidence?

Well, that's about it, I guess. Have a great day/night, and of course, thank you for sharing this wonderful story with all of us!

That part with Lucy finding herself listing the reasons she likes Natsu is so sweet aaahhh. I'm not really sure what to say since I've read these events before aha, but hmmm seeing the whole thing from Lucy's perspective just makes me appreciate the NaLu moments more :D

That part in the beginning, with the father-daughter disdain for the Orlandos, I liked that aha. And Wendy, hm? She seems to have been a NaLu shipper from the start, I love her.

Natsu seems to be a lot more impulsive this chapter when people are ragging on Lucy, wonder what thaaaatt means. And aahh Lucy's planning on confessing, wonder how that'll go down.

Wasn't this mentioned in Chairs, how Sabertooth sabotaged them so they'd lose?

But on a happier note, somehow I feel like the ball hitting the fence when Loke asked Lucy to the Festival wasn't just a coincidence... hmmm. And ooohh, Lucy's getting out of deniaaall

Mira's so sneaky, I love it. And Natsu and Lucy actually kissed for real this time; ohh I wonder what went through the boy's head when that happened. I liked that sleepover scene more than I probably should've, and it seems like Lucy's starting to realize her feelings, huh. (‿)

Also... did you just mention that Fried actually bet on them? Haha ohh Fried

Her friends are so sweet, fixing her flute for her; wish I had friends like that. ( ; ; ) And all the NaLu moments, my gosh they're all so cute haha. Lucy's getting more flustered with Natsu, and Natsu getting embarrassed when Lucy finds out he persuaded her dad to come. Not to mention that kiss! Ahh, goodness. Also, I really liked seeing how far Laxus has come and how much Lucy's relationship with her dad has improved. Makes me a bit happy. c:

Natsu's and Lucy's relationship was able to go back to what it used to, I'm glad. I really like how you wrote him and how you made them friends first and foremost! And ahh, that's how their tradition started. And of course, the infamous sabotage. I don't really understand Minerva, does she really believe that Sabertooth will win? Does she secretly feel threatened to the point where she needs to rely on dirty tricks for their success? Or does she just do those things for her own enjoyment, regardless of whether or not she sees them as an obstacle?

...Well actually, either way doesn't really change the fact that she's still a horrible person in the first place, so \_(ツ)_/

It's easy to become filled with venom, especially when people are trying to help but aren't exactly doing it the best way. Even more especially when something that big is happening in your life. Worry and sadness on top of frustration make it easy for one to want to shut people out. I think you did okay.

I really like platonic LoLu, so I'm glad you included it in the story! It sometimes frustrates me when people make things seem as if the world revolves around the love interest and as if the love interest is the only person that they can trust. Don't get me wrong, romantic love is fine, but love between friends is often overlooked, so thank you for showing it! And also thank you for portraying Lisanna in a good light, because I feel we need a bit more of that in NaLu things.

But anyways, I'm happy to see that things are starting to look up for Lucy again! She's lucky to have so many people she can depend on. And now the characters are officially older than me... huh.

Hmm I know this is ultimately a NaLu fic, but the NaLi right now is cute too! I just hope that things don't end up bitter between the two girls. Also, I can't believe it took them two years before Natsu's dream to have them all sit together at lunch aha

That end though... what a way to end such a happy chapter omg. I guess I'm not TOO worried since we see Jude in Chairs, but still. That got sad real fast.

Hmm that part where Laxus tells Lucy that she's not one of them, I feel like I could kind of empathize with what Lucy felt in that moment. I've never really lived in a place long enough to have that kind of history with people, where we've known each other and have been together since we were little. But even though I've never been able to experience that sort of thing, it never really felt like it got in the way of me being a part of them. But if somebody were to tell me that I don't belong, it would definitely cut really deep. But I guess that's why I loved the part where they assured Lucy that she's one of them now even more!

Aahh I started rambling, sorry. But on a lighter note, it feels like Wendy is lowkey shipping NaLu haha

That little bit in the beginning about Natsu and Gray fighting over a tater tot reminded me about how I fought over a tater tot too once... Of course, it definitely wasn't up to the same caliber as a Natsu and Gray fight aha

I think it's really sweet how Natsu holds on to his memory of the Fantasia parade because of what it did for his sister, it just feels so pure aahhh

And I loved the part at the end where everybody did the sign together, and I also really like Lucy was the one to start it. It showed their unity nicely, and it just felt so, well, Fairy Tail.

Ahh yep, the BroTPs definitely don't disappoint in this fic. And Wendy is so cute here! Also, hmmm... I get the feeling that Natsu talks quite a bit about Lucy to his parents. c:

I like how this is a NaLu fic, but it still involves a lot about their other friends too. I mean, I do enjoy romance, but I'm an absolute sucker for BroTPs haha. You've captured their lively spirits well!