| Reviews for Returning Back Home Quest |
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  ggGTtftfgtfgtggt chapter 7 . 2/6/2019 T |
 IpiuGate chapter 11 . 12/20/2016 I like this story and you clearly have some great ideas but your grammar could use a slight touch up. Most verbs seem to be in third person present or a simple past tense which is commonly used and so seems appropriate most of the time, however that is not always the case and in the rare instances where another tense should be used like future or subjunctive it feels wrong. The pleasure to be had from reading would only increase with the correct form of verbs. Good luck for the future |
| Frostfire613 chapter 32 . 8/1/2016 LOL I loved how you put in an optional NatsuxGray pairing XD |
| Pleaseworkforonce chapter 2 . 8/1/2016 I hate to be this blunt, but the grammar in the early chapters (I'm only up to chapter 2) is terrible. Just as an example in chapter two you had the line "Dinner was soon served and really Sting and Lector were like gluttony that eats so much with joy on their faces." This sentence comes off as really choppy and has a few errors in it (For example the word "really" should not be in there at all). Sorry for basing my review on an earlier chapter, but it is very distracting, and I felt the need to point it out. |
| 0FairyTail0 chapter 32 . 8/1/2016 It's the end already? Man, I didn't know time went that fast. Anyways, great fanfic! I really enjoyed it til the end. |
| MioRiChan chapter 32 . 8/1/2016 I love normal ending & gray ending... WHAAAAAAAAA!~ TT i cried |
| Guest chapter 31 . 7/30/2016 NALU! NALU! PLEEESE NALU! |
| darkhuntressxir chapter 31 . 7/29/2016 so yua, is zeref spy... |
| Namuun0914 chapter 31 . 7/27/2016 It's a great story but do you plan on starting a new story after this? Please answer my question |
| MioRiChan chapter 31 . 7/27/2016 Oh.. SHIT ! :V WHAT IS THIS !? YUA IS- ZEREF FRIENDS ?! OH MY GOD ! |
| MioRiChan chapter 30 . 7/24/2016 HUWAAAA~ I CRIED IN SAME TIME LAUGH XD WHAT THE HECK WITH THIS AWESOME CHAPTER ! |
| Anglelover1827 chapter 30 . 7/24/2016 I knew it I was right |
| darkhuntressxir chapter 29 . 7/15/2016 awesome! natsu got his power back and will the guild know about E.N.D ? |
| MioRiChan chapter 29 . 7/14/2016 THIS IS F**KING AWESOME ! UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ! ( *Q* ) |
| Anglelover1827 chapter 29 . 7/14/2016 Will natsu remember he's zeref brother. |
