Aww that last part was great! But Tara almost got killed O.o
Good chapter and update soon :)

Again, the nagging grammatical/spelling errors are very distracting...

It's not clear in the beginning where exactly they are. Focus a little on setting when you write a new chapter. It helps the reader see everything in their minds more clearly.

I like that she consults a woman for her relationship concerns. You really know how to project Girl Power! I like it!

And the power of a passionate kiss... You did a really good job using kisses as a GREAT communication medium. It makes sense and it passionate.

All in all, this is a good story. Fix your grammar/spelling/setting issues and this is an even BETTER story. Overall, good job!

This chapter surprised me. The unexpected high number of grammatical and spelling errors was distracting.

Now that that's out of the way, this is a deeply passionate and very cute chapter. I never tire of reading love stories in TWD fanfiction and this one doesn't disappoint. The 'I'll always be there to catch you' line was so incredibly cheesy and sweet - that combination works wonders in fanfiction.

And the ending was such a good example of how dangerous alcohol is in this harsh world - a lesson that applies to OUR world too. Nice.

Good opener - we see how they protect and care for each other. It's always good to read scenes like these in TWD fanfiction and you didn't disappoint.
I also liked that Maggie killed the majority of the walkers. Shows the true strength of women in this harsh world.
And the fact that they are together and KNOW that the group won't care, speaks volumes to acceptance of ALL relationships. That's very smart to show.
Good opening chapter.

Tara is so clumsy

Good so far, although dang Tara almost got bit by a walker, good thing Rosita was there :)
Please write more!

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Nice start :) Glad to see another Tara/Rosita fic, Hope you update soon