Reviews for It's a Beautiful Day Outside
Synth chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
I cried! This is awesomely sad! Good job bob!
shannello chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
i'll never do a genocide run, but i'll indulge a little. this fic was expertly written. you've captured sans' voice completely, which makes this even harder to read - i friggen love sans, he's my homie, why did i do this to myself

love how you've stylized this piece (the inclusion of stats, keeping track of resets), it makes it feel very true to the game itself, and true to sans' character. he can get cocky, but that's why we love him.

thanks for writing, i absolutely loved it. 10/10
HardyGal chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
Good gosh, that last part really got to me. Especially when Papyrus's specter showed up, that was amazingly well written. This was a wonderful fanfic. Thank you.
Undyne IMDYING chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Geez, that ending brought a tear to my eye. :'(

Very well written, great story. Keep it up!
FullMetalPon-3 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
*Sobs internally*
So, I don't know if you can see this, but I was the person who said they made Be Careful Making Wishes fanart. I still can't show it to you, but that's who I am.
Anyway, this was very touching, loved the little Papyrus bit at the end. Seriously, if you couldn't reset a game, the bosses would win. Resetting a game makes me feel like I'm cheating now, and I haven't even played Undertale yet. Soon...
I was looking at your tumblr, and I just noticed you said that you don't believe that Sans cries or screams when he has nightmares, and I totally can see where you are coming from. I mean, the dude keeps joking and teasing you even after you destroyed everything he cares about.
But... Perhaps the reason he's like this is because he's already seen so much death and horror that he now is indifferent. He obviously still feels for his friends, but at this point, he probably feels like tears and vengeance are useless.
Maybe at some point, he did cry at watching his brother die, and screamed at nightmares, but now he just silently hates whoever kills Papyrus, and keeps his nightmares to himself. But he may need to retreat into hoodie-town occasionally. (Sorry, just drew Sans in Hoodie Town and am very proud of how it turned out) Anyway, this is something I could explain better vocally, but hopefully you can see where I'm coming from. Sorry for the very long tirade, but I don't have any friends that play Undertale yet. *But I spoiled everything for myself even though I haven't either.*
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Random Stranger chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
I really enjoyed reading this. Very captivating and very heart wrenching as well. Keep it up!
Chara chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
*Hm. ABOUT DAMN TIME.
Moodle McDoodle chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
;_;
Mr Beaver Buttington chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
That was damn well written. It also skilfully conveyed the emotions of the character along with their personality on pretty much a flawless level.

You more than earned a spot in my favorites.
shizukopride chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
I enjoyed this. The characterization of Sans was great; I could picture all that was happening without having to wonder if the characters would react or say such things. That being said...

... I completely agree with a previous reviewer. I don't have the heart to do a genocide route - but I am willing to emotionally compromise myself by reading fanfics.

Great job!
Someone chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
And that is why I will never do the genocide route.
anon chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
This is really great! hurts my heart to read (in a good way).