Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

Sansa isn't handling the time travel well at all. She's actually really smart in the show, especially after all she went through. She wouldn't act so rashly if sent to the past. She would know very well to act her part while gathering information about what's going on. She may not be able to completely hide changes in her personality, but blurting things out like she is and acting totally weird is just annoying. I don't like how you portray Sansa. You don't do her justice.

I'm disappointed by your changes to the story. I really enjoyed Littlefinger's death in the show and how it was such a stepping stone for Sansa. It was so important for her character development, along with killing Ramsay. I feel like you took that away for her with your changes and possibly weakened her character. I wish you had sent her back during the battle with the Knight King or something along with Tyrion. Their relationship could have developed from both waking up in the past with terrible knowledge of the future and relying on one another to build a better one. The build up of her and Tyrion's love is now in your story's past, and something already developed that your readers won't get the chance to explore or understand because you've decided to just make it a reality of your timeline. It would have been more interesting without the crazy changes, I think.

Absolutely love this story. one of my top favorites. thank you.

Ohhhhh it was so sweet to see Sansa and Arya like that together !

While Sansa fucking with Jamie, Tyrion and Sandor's mind is funny, I'm more miffed about how Sansa was touching them (well except Tyrion at the moment). It's hard to believe that they would allow her to do so like she did...

It's also unsettling to see that there are some things that can't be changed ! Maybe it's because this needs to happen to Bran so that he leaves for North to ultimately become the Three Eyed Raven ?

Well certain things are bound to happen... Sansa's gonna feel awful !

I'm really struggling with this fic... I really like the idea but it's hard to stomach this Mary-Sue Sansa who's never wrong and always has a witty comeback ready to be delivered.

And why on earth would Cersei ask for Sansa's death ?! How completely stupid is that ! Do you have any idea what kind of character Cersei ? Because with how you're portraying her, she's just missing a moustache to twirl.

Also it's a bit late to be fostering the Reed children, no ? Sansa is gonna be leaving for King's Landing with Ned and Arya in like a week.

Ohh that's a disappointing chapter... Feels way too Mary-Sue-ish. She's just there to shock and awe people she interacts with. She seemingly shocked and awed the Hound and Jaime in one evening ! They just listened AND apparently believed what she said, a 12 year old girl...

Okay I've got to say that Sansa is handling the 'time travel' business really badly. She's showing off too much unexpected knowledge ! She basically kinda told Jon that she knew the future...

Her Ser Arthur Dayne comments were unnecessary and just draw more attention to her

Yeah come on Sansa ! I hope she slits Littlefingers' throat

Oh I'm totally down for a nice Sansa/Tyrion story !

Wow ;)

I love how possessive Sansa is ;)

I’ve just reread this for the 3rd time this year! I love this story. I hope your well and doing ok in these quarantine and uncertain times!