I love this story! I especially like the amount of vivid imagery that allows you to really be there, in the moment of your story. I can't wait to see where this story goes, so please update soon! Thank you for sharing your fabulous magical brain juices with your lovely FF readers!

Nice

Your off to a good start. Looking forward to more chapters.

Really enjoying it so far dude, keep it up. LOVE your descriptions of the backgrounds and areas, big selling point for me. Bit confused as to where Naruto got a kunai but I'll roll with it aha. Wouldn't think he would have any left considering the whole travelling across the dimensions thing :P

Your writing is superb! Keep it up, this is a good story so far. I especially like your portrayal of Naruto, it fits him exactly.

Ah, I see you've at least mentioned the hair, that's good I don't know how many fics just gloss over that.

As for Naruto itself I found like most of Shippuden to be, like, a four out of ten. But the war arc was especially frustrating on the grounds that it could've been so much more but instead descended into black and white morality and a bunch of horrifically stupid chain of man behind the man reveals. Oh, and fuck Naruto forgiving Obito!

Also, I don't understand why people refer to Naruto as 'over powered' considering what he carries in his stomach is basically an infinite chakra battery he's just as powerful as he should be. He's super powered if anything.

Anyways, I'm liking this so far.

Blonde hair is kinda... Non existent in ATLA. Someone should probably bring that up at some point.

Holy shit this is fantastic!

Looking good. :-)

I am really enjoying the story so far. Most of the Naruto/Avatar crossovers have Naruto meeting Anng and the others right away and joining their adventure. It is cool to see Naruto having his own adventure within the Avatar world.

This Is Pretty Good :D Will Naruto Be Able To Use All The Elements Because He Can Control His Chakra?

great story

Well, this is interesting. Hopefully you blend Naruto well with this crossover, so many people write these crossovers and Naruto is as slow as dirt.

I've literally yet to see an avatar crossover with Naruto where the individual abilities of each world and used properly, mostly on the Naruto side of things.

I liked the story so far, but for how wordy it was not much happened. 10 thousand words, and what's happened? The requisite prologue, being found, finding out it's a new world, an afternoon of chores, and exposition on an OC. That being said, I liked it, I think you've got a good premise, and I'm sure you've got a good plan, but I hope you don't get burned out on the sheer amount of words you'll end up typing. I look forward to reading more, and thanks for writing.

This is gonna be awesome. Naruto joins the war against the Fire Nation. Wonder how it'll go. He should have Daiyu stick with him as he helps Aang win this century-old war.