Now I'm really interested. Keep it up!

that was awesome

ur stories get better and better evry time i read them :)

ur an great writer.

i nearly thought Ash and Ho-oh were good as dead (which they were)but way'ta go white ho-oh, i got confued at that part, but soon figured it out !clever U!

anyway i can't wait to read the next fic, so excuse me while i search for the sequel :) 'Orbs of Sunlight'

Catch ya later!

I like this one too. On to the sequel! Away!

the title sound me like de video game of thousand arms jeje but its a great story

U r evil, I hate waiting for sequels. Still I can't wait! Come out with a sequel soon!

Interesting ending! I see a sequel in the future! Please update soon!

I knew it. I knew it. The white Ho-Oh did have something to do with bring Ash and Ho-Oh back to life. At least the dark Ho-Oh and all the dark Pokemon are dead now. Oh its another squel to reveal the sun. Man it must be cold in the Pokemon world right now without any sun. On to Goldenrod. keep writing I can't wait to read the squel to this story. What will the next story be called? Here's a title but I bet you won't use it. Orbs of Sunlight. Like it, hate it? I don't care. I feel hyper right now.

is a very good story my congratullations! I will wait another chapter and did much stories.

Ohh...I hope that was Ash. Makes sense if it did after all with the two white beams they have to go somewhere.

Also how did the Dark Ho-Oh recover? Did he used some kind of special attack that we will never see? Oh well This chapter is called Confusion.

Cool chapter! I have a feeling on who the mystery person is who saved Pikachu! I'm confused on how the Dark Ho-oh survived the attack, though. I gues I'll find out later. Please update soon!

Whoa so Rick is the true bearer of the sword chosen by Mew. The only problem is that the sword broke releasing a white Ho-Oh. Whoa so Ash came back to life again? Strange where did he get all that power. I know that Pikapi means Ash/ Satoshi, but how he come back to life? Does it have to do with the white Ho-Oh? Interesting keep writing I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I'm definitly confused, besides I was reading fast. What happens! Update soon!

WHAT DO YOU MEAN ASH IS DEAD? HE CAN'T BE DEAD! DOES THAT MEAN HO-OH IS DEAD TOO? Good chapter, but this is bad about the legendaries. Thanks for the e-mail by the way, that did clear everything up. Please update soon! SO I CAN FIND OUT WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO ASH!

WHAT! You killed Ash. You actually killed the boy this time. If ASh is dead that means Ho-OH is dead to since the two are joined. Okay if Ash is dead who's goign to save the world from the dark legendaries. Misty and Rick? Those two are going to save the world or are you going to bring Ash back to life somehow. Keep wriitn I got to know what will happen next.

it,s as good as the 1st story Pls continue!