Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Her interaction with characters and some resurfacing mild memories... You are great!

It was a great story. I truly hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it. Hope you'll continue at some point :)

Is Mitama a reborn version of herself? If she wanted 24 and she's...eight? she died at 16. Mission, perhaps?

I know this is canceled/being rewritten, but I wanted to just leave a comment letting you know how much I enjoyed what you've written in this fic! I love Mitama's personality and the way she is simultaneously aware that she has some sort of recollection of another life while also being ignorant of the entirety of it. I also love how vague you've made her other life, like why she feels so connected to Minato and how she feels so safe and secure because of Sakumo. Even if you never continue or rewrite this I'm glad I stumbled upon it!

IS THAT

mitama is an unbelievably refreshing and humane character. ayakosakumo was an impressive addition to her character growth and i’m loving this so far.

this was really awesome to read looking forward to finding out how her life will turn out

awesome story so far so good and im hooked well off to read the next chapter

Minato can't go with Mitama!? Or NARUTO won't be born. Uzumaki Naruto must have his real parents. Fathers look and mother's power and personality, and he needs to be Uzumaki to became host for Kurama and father as hokage cuz Hokage will never seal kyuubi to anyone else if he has son.

Sac-man and Toader were clear enough; but Unknown Headquarters is still throwing me, even after a trip to Wikipedia and KLOV.

"While her taijutsu scores were relatively low, residing in the lowest percentile,"

The lowest 1%? That's not just "relatively low"; that's abysmal. Try 'lowest quartile'. *Maybe* 'lowest decile', although she'd have to outshine Minato at absolutely everything else to make second place.

I love Mitama, she's golden and deserves all the good things in life, I feel sad as I'm reading and I remember what she's gone through. I really like her and Kushina's relationship but I wonder about why Mitama's almost hot and cold towards her.

This was phenomenal, like seriously words can't describe how beautifully descriptive and poignant this was honestly

I really like and appriciate your story. It different from previous styles ive read. I also ship your character with minato instead of the usual kushina and hope they get together in the end. I look forward to future updates. Thanks for the story.

This story is wonderful. I love how complex your character is and what look forward to reading more.

Please update soon.

I know it maybe a little rude but could you tell me what the pairing is in this fic

So far it looks like its
Mita/mina and kush/mita and im guessing mina/kush

I was actually hoping for more shika/mita or inoi/mita scenes. I feel like the two could really help mitama out.

I just get the feeling that with minato your character is getting a little too fan girly. I missed when she wasnt interested in anyone.