update please

This story was very interesting and well written. Original characters are hard to write but you made a likely person. I liked Loki in this one. Keep up the good work.

This story is amazing! Its so heartwarming and lokis character is so mature, kind and gentle! I'm glad Odin is dead now.
Just a suggestion though because if Sarah dies Loki will be supper depressed. Maybe she could be given induun's golden apples so that she would live longer with Loki? Anyway can't wait to see what happens next.

Great Chapter!
What is happening to Thor? Part of me thinks Odin would give Thor ultimatum: either bring back your brother or take his place. If you aid a criminal, then you are just as responsible for his actions as he is.
How will Loki helps the Avengers if Sarah has to stay close to him? Will he just have a consulting role? If he helps with Shield, will he run into Jane? She's probably wondering were Thor is. Did he tell her he was leaving?
Also can't Loki cast illusions to fool the cameras. Like make look like Sarah is taking a shower in a Victorian bathing suit or something so she never appears naked. Or maybe he'll cover himself in wookie like body hair, so he never appears naked. Does getting under the covers count as blocking the camera? Are there any camera outside the house? What happens would Loki goes hunting into woods? Does that count as leaving the house?
Update soon

At least they're home now, but i'd like to know more reasons for this. Update again soon please.

Odin is a monstrous old, he has fun in just torture Loki, nothing more. I hope thatt Thor is good, but I do not know not: Will Thor is in receipt of Odin's wrath?

I'm glad that Thor and Frigga are opposing Odin and his rapist soldiers.

I enjoyed seeing the Avengers and Fury reasoning and understanding that Loki and Sarah need help. Odin is a worm, that old bastard.

Now why on Earth would Odin go after Sarah if he was the one who used her to get Loki to learn more about humanity? Hope Thor's alright, now i'm eager to see what happens next.

Update soon please.