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CHAPTER 11

WHERE IS CHAPTER 11!

Ahhhh, update! Don't leave us on a cliffhanger.

please continue! What happens next? YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE US LIKE THIS!

ooooooooh...what's Reyna going to do? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter. Nice story so far!

Oh my gods oh my gods oh my gods UPDATE! THIS IS SO FRICKING GOOD! I LOVE THIS!

Need. New. Chapter. (This may sound a bit pushy but I NEED TO KNOWW)

I love this story! It's one of the better Solangelo fics I've read. Please don't get discouraged.

I really like this, hope you update soon! :)

So, I heard you wanted reviews? :)
The story idea is good, and your plot is pretty good as well. So far the characters are mostly in character, so that's another plus.
A grammar issue (minor) that I noticed, though: when characters talk with a tag in between what they're saying, it's a comma. That might not make sense, but here's and example:
"Blah," said the character. "Blah."
As opposed to what you have now, which is
"Blah." Said the character. "Blah."
However, when it's a question or exclamation, what you have ("Blah?" asked the character. "Blah.") is correct.
Another (non-grammatical) thing I noticed is that you tend to write in lists. I don't mean numbered lists or things like that- I mean when you describe what the characters are doing. For example, when you describe the weapons everyone is holding, it goes like this:
Piper had a dagger. Jason had a sword. Percy had a pen sword. Nico had a sword. Will had a bow. Etc.
That's, to be honest, boring to read, and it sounds very choppy. Also, describing Riptude as a "pen sword" is kind of repetitive in fanfiction- we know what weapon Percy uses. The "had" or "held"s also get a bit redundant. You could edit it by doing it like this:
Nico and Jason had swords, while Will had his bow. Piper clutched (or some other adjective) her dagger, and Percy hefted up (or some other description) Riptide.
It makes it more interesting to read, and shows more about their reactions to the strange sound as well, so you accomplish more by describing their weapons.
Just one more thing! When your characters have monologues, when they just talk without others interrupting, please space it out. Like, when Reyna gives her little speech to Nico and Will, describe her actions while saying it, or what Nico and Will's reactions are.
For instance (this is a random speech):
Instead of: "Your fanfiction is really good, but just needs some grammatical changes and stylistic changes. Those are easily fixable, and overall, you're a great author! Keep on writing and don't give up."
You could do: "Your fanfiction is really good, but just needs some grammatical changes and stylistic changes," the reviewer paused for breath. "Those are easily fixable, and overall, you're a great author!" She glanced at the author to gauge his/her reaction. "Keep on writing and don't give up."
I like your POV changes- it really rounds out your story. Besides all that stuff I mentioned before, this is a great fanfic.
And that "random speech"? I meant it :)

this is a great story so far but you have to make more chapters please! :] :)

I am not good with reviews so sorry if it will not be helpful.
I'm liking the fic so far. It is really sweet and best part no sex so far.
Just one question, do you know what you wanna accomplish with this fic?
Too bad you are not updating during Christmas. That would be a nice gift.
Sorry if it is not helpful and keep the sweet work.

So cute Solangelo

Plz keep writing... I am dieing to know what the plan is

You did well!