Wondering what it would take to get you to update this after so long. it is such a wonderfully written piece that even after reading it multiple times, I find I can come back and do it again.

Ah yes present the strong confident front by being a little bitch and capitulating on everything. great job Harry, truly.

Why the hell harry will calmly pleadingly ask Snape pr Maxima when they disrespected your ff is all notice but no action no wonder it was a flop

I don't believe I've ever read anything so laden with cringe in my entire life, this somehow manages to be worse than any self-insert or wish-fulfillment fic

The hell? Harry would murder a bunch of second years for being childish and immature... when they are, in fact, immature children? He would seriously break and/or remove their bones and voice box for being children and doing what children are apt to do? I am not sure I like Harry at all. Nor Daphne since she thinks he is cool for threatening death and torture on children for being exactly what they are.

I find it odd that Harry nor Fleur noticed their surroundings or their audience right when they started making love. They would have been awake so they have no excuse for not stopping and for not ensuring privacy before they finished. Why would Black not play a part in the story? Would it not be required to marry both of the Greengrass siblings? One for each family name?

Great story

Wow, that was a great read. Thanks for the chapters!
Please keep up the great work and update soon :D

It started as an interesting story, but when it's unveiled that Harry lied to his 'best friends' so completely for years that they don't have the faintest clue who he is... not only is it unbelievable, but it also portrays Harry as totally self centered and uncaring of others except in those areas where they are convenient and useful to his own ends. by the end of the second chapter, Harry quite resembled Tom Riddle in his use of others for his own purposes... it's a shame as I really hope the story would be worth reading and most of it was.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Ehhh...sorry, i can see a biker asshole sharing a cunt with a brother, but a rich bitch sharing a guy with a sister ? Naaah, never gonna happen. Only in stories that are completely batshit insane, like Harem Wars.

Really like the different personalities involved in the relationship. Definitely adds some flavor to something that could of been bland due to overexposure (mostly because a lot of authors try this pairing or similar ones and they can get old if not changed up a bit). You did a very good job of putting your own spin on it and I will certainly remember Tory's personality as it was highly amusing.

Exceptionally intriguing chapter. I am definitely looking forward to seeing how you play out the mass deception and the repercussions of this chapter.

I'll admit that this Ron would have been way better in cannon.
But I kinda hoped it to be a Ron bash, oh well.

I really like this story and I love how you portrayed the girls and Harry.