This story was EPIC. I read it all in the past few days, and I am so incredibly impressed by it. Your writing is so advanced, and you're so good at putting emotion into your writing. I LOVE Kendal, and I am so happy he was the victor. I can't wait to read more of your stories and delve deeper into your writing!

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GRAVITY FUCKING STOWERS IS BACK BITCHES! I love that meme too much, okay?

Well, here we are. Glad to see you also used the roller coaster pun lol. But this was a very sweet way of ending this story. You really showed how no one was going to be okay winning in that arena, but they can find reasons to live and still be happy. Even if it is the fucking meme Gravity Fucking Stowers.

Well, this was a nice trip. A very wild and emotional one happening over a limited time, but still a good one. I wasn't joking when I said I was going to binge this all weekend lol.

CQ: Honestly, my favorite part was just the entire Capitol subplot. It was wild from start to finish and sue me, I love Gamemaker subplots. And I love that it tied in with the arena and just made things so completely crazy and fucked up.

Well Celtic, thanks for an awesome story to read. And thanks for putting up with me spamming you with notifications for all of these reviews XD

Alright, second half of the districts. These ones...hurt a bit more. Probably because a lot of my favorites were from these districts. Which was really dumb for me to pick favorites when I knew there was absolutely no chance they were winning, but sue me, there were some good ones in this story.

CQ: Well, Andy stood out and I knew she would because Riella came in second, so of course that one was going to be sad. Another surprising one was Felicity's boyfriend. I know, I was never a fan of her. But it was just a sad reminder that she did have someone who loved her and she did lose a child too.

Okay, I really liked these little looks into the friends and families of those lost. Honestly, I might end up doing this for Overlooked just to really mess with everyone's feels. Not much to say because I'm honestly mentally exhausted from this. It's a nice little way to just wrap up the story.

CQ: Alright, I loved D2 for Vidarr. And Odin wins, right? I think I recall reading about him in Danzon. If that's the case, that's really cool that Vidarr's son gets to be a victor. Also, I really liked the D3 scene because it was just neat to have these two boys who went through the same experience, plus their aunt and uncle were allies in the arena.

Alright. The literal hell is finally done. And you know, reading Kendal's final section was what made me be like 'Yes, he's the victor that Panem needs right now and he's going to do great!' Riella, while she was a fierce af queen, I can see why you didn't pick her. And, at the end of the day, it's your decision who gets to be the victor. Like you said, you have to keep writing the victor. That's why I'm cool with who I have lined up as victor for Overlooked (no spoilers from me ;) )

Man, what a crazy ride this has been. Definitely a roller coaster (lol, I'm trash ignore me) of feels to take in in the span of a couple hours! But it was crazy and tbh this makes me want to go reread Danzon? I won't because one I need more points and two I can't take all of that heartache omg. Well, maybe I'll read the mentor chapters now that I know more about Kendal.

CQ: Well, Kendal is currently trying to save my son so I can't complain about him haha. But seriously, he's a good victor. Someone who is actually going to make a difference for people. As for the District epilogues, I really want to see D7's reaction, but also D2 because of Vidarr.

THREE CHAPTERS LEFT WOO!

Fuck me, I hit post on accident before I was done with the review.

CQ: CONTINUING ON BEFORE I WAS INTERRUPTED BY MYSELF BEING AN IDIOT! Idk about things to do differently because you've already made a ton of changes between this and Danzon. Honestly I loved the gimmick of the silhouettes because it was so creepy and it also made the title for this so perfect. Also, of course, that subplot was awesome. But you don't need me telling you that, you're still doing crazy and evil stuff like that. I guess the only qualm I have with this is that I've just started to prefer reading stories told in third person. So, not a qualm with the actual story lol, just a personal opinion XD

AHHHH NEXT CHAPTER IS THE FINALE AND FUCK ME IT'S BETWEEN KENDAL AND RIELLA? SHIT MAN, ALRIGHT, HERE WE GO!

Man...I actually almost started crying there at the end with Kade's death, which is weird because he hasn't been one of my favorites. It was more so that after this literal hell that he's been forced through, he finally gets to have peace and be with his loved ones.

Also, I can't even imagine what it would be like to be in Kade's shoes when they specifically said that Sophia was going to be targeted if they don't move. That's an absolutely terrifying thought.

Also, when the fuck is someone gonna murder Joltee?]

CQ: At least, I think this is your CQ but it wasn't listed, but I'll answer anyways. Obviously I'm submitting to you again (seeing as I've started to think about a tribute for Danzon sequel).

WELL SHIT SANTANA KILLED HERSELF. THAT HAD ME STARING AT MY COMPUTER WITH MY MOUTH OPEN AND I WAS BASICALLY JUST LIKE :O WOW. OKAY, TALK ABOUT CRAZY SUBPLOT. OH BOY IF THE DANZON SUBPLOT IS ANYTHING LIKE THIS, JUST RIP ME AND ALL OF MY FEELINGS.

Raoul, noooo! T.T although, I knew his death was coming. But still, he was one of my favorites! And Martina too! She was a surprising major player in these games and I was really enjoying her. Damn, these two hurt a lot to lose. BUT SHIT WE'RE AT THE FINAL THREE.

CQ: I really don't know who I expected to be in the final three aside from Kendal. But I'm happy with Riella because she's totally one of my favorites but that's going to hurt because I'm assuming her and Kendal are going to fight. As for Kade...he's cool, but ehhh, I would have preferred Martina in the final three over him. Now if I was reading this at the time, I probably would be rooting for Riella to win.

Shit man, holy shit. Idk what words are currently. Wait, I know two. Fuck Joltee. GAH I HAVE SO MANY FEELS. Diesel fucked up royally but damn, Joltee was fucking ruthless in killing everyone. Burning his niece alive? What the fuck man.

I have no clue what's happening to Santana now. Technically she didn't have anything to do with what Diesel did, seeing as he punched her in the face. But I don't think Joltee is going to consider that.

Okay, so I don't even know how many tributes are left at this point omg. Kendal, Raoul, Kade, Riella, and Martina? I might be missing one.

CQ: YES I LOVE YOUR CAPITOL SIDE PLOTS SO MUCH! It certainly added to the tributes because obviously it made the arena even more of a literal hell. And it totally added well to the story and made it unique!

Noooo not Cyra omg okay but seriously, good for her taking out the biggest competition not only among those left, but out of all 24 tributes. As for Iridesce, they were hella cool and I enjoyed them, and I always love when a tribute kills their killer.

Go Kendal for still helping out Raoul even though they weren't allies anymore! And when I read the part about the jabberjays, I laughed and just thought 'what a fucking nerd' lol but it's okay, he's a lovable nerd.

I'll admit, I'm not sure what it is that you were excited to include since the reapings. But I'm sure someone already figured it out and got the ten bonus points.

CQ: Hmm, honestly, there are a few that I would say deserve second chances. I think I'm gonna go with my cinnamon roll alliance of Cyra, Ductor, and Hamilton. They all deserved better.

I'm so close to the end of the games and I'm sure it's just going to keep getting worse with whatever crazy Diesel is unleasing. Unless someone stops him soon.

CELTIC WHY WOULD YOU HAVE VIDARR DIE WHEN WE'RE GETTING ASHE'S INTERVIEW WHYYYYY OMG THE CAPITOL TOTALLY DID THAT INTENTIONALLY TO FUCK WITH HER. WELL GUESS WHAT, IT ALSO FUCKED WITH MY HEART T.T

And Cyra's boyfriend was so sweet and their love is so pure T.T

Andy is still absolutely hilarious. Agata is best friend goals lol.

Man, this chapter just made me love all of the remaining tributes left even more, which is going to make this even harder to keep reading!

CQ: Hmm, I would probably go to the roller coaster because it's the biggest ride and probably what I would notice first. Hopefully I wouldn't die in the bloodbath lol.

Alright I'm so close to the end now and I have to keep going!

WELL FUCK ME, BLOOD RAIN? HOLY FUCK THAT WOULD BE TERRIFYING. And poor Cory, you didn't deserve to die like that because Diesel went crazy T.T AND MAGGIE NO! CELTIC NO I DON'T LIKE THIS AND I REALLY HOPE THIS ISN'T WHAT HAPPENS IN THE NEXT DANZON CHAPTER T.T TOO MANY GOOD TRIBUTES ARE DYING TOO QUICKLY.

I'm scared to see what happens next. It certainly can't be good. Sorry my reviews are probably going to get shorter now because I just need to keep reading to figure out what happens next.

CQ: I'm also saying Raoul (fuck me he's going to die soon T.T). As for where, I always love just chill dates of just hanging out. So movie and cuddles with Raoul! As for who to be a third wheel with, let's go with Riella and Andy because they're so much fun and I don't think I would feel too much like a third wheel with them!

OKAY CONTINUING ON AHH I HAVE SO MANY FEELS.

Celtic. I'm just sitting here, mouth hanging open like a fucking idiot, because HOLY FUCKING SHIT THINGS ARE ABOUT TO GET SO FUCKING CRAZY! Omg if I actually had a tribute in this story, I would have gone into panic mode (like I am currently with Syca) because hot damn. Here I was, just starting to really like Diesel and feel for him after he did the right thing and didn't take advantage of Viridian.

BUT THEN HE GOES FUCKING CRAZY AND PUNCHES SANTANA? FUCK I NEED TO START THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP.

CQ: I FUCKING LOVE GAMEMAKER INTERLUDES! Okay, I'm gonna predict the gimmick/silhouettes are going to be there all the time now, not just at 'night'. And holy shit, are the rides going to start working? That would be hella creepy. And I have no clue what mutts are going to be there...but I'm sure they're going to be terrifying. I CAN'T WAIT!

Well shit, Kade killed Collin. I thought Collin was going to win that fight but, you surprised me like usual. Collin was a big competitor, that's for sure. I had him in the top half so woo look at me go, getting an accurate prediction!

Also, does Iridesce use both they/them and she/her pronouns? Because that's the case, I don't feel so shitty anymore about using she/her before. But I'll still stick with they/them for now.

Oh no, things are going to change? This will not be good. Not good at all lol. But hey, at least I don't have to wait to find out XD

CQ: Should Maggie and Riella have killed Iridesce before leaving? BECAUSE YEAH THAT WAS SO FUCKING DUMB TO LEAVE LITERALLY THEIR BIGGEST COMPETITOR ALIVE. Like they could have killed Iridesce without taking any injuries to themselves. Ugh. I'm not salty about that at all lol.