Nice. It's about time for Jane and Kurt to find each other. Hope you write more.

Amazing, please write more!

...as he opens his eyes, and they're warm now; a placid, peaceful, fathomless blue that pull her in, take her under...

Pretty sure you could have just written *insert heart eyes*. Lol.

Really though, excellent job. Can there be more?

Ummm... More? Lol

Excellent work.

I loved reading this in its full, completed form.

This is still my favorite line(s):
“If Weller found out… He’d be beyond anger and disappointment. She knows his investment bleeds across too many spectrums, his involvement has never been anything but personal so there wouldn’t be a professional way for them to even consider approaching this.”
It’s just such a loaded line, and I love how much Jane recognizes their relationship for what it is, even before the two of them come to terms with it. Nothing is simple or professional between them, no matter if it should be or could be. They just can’t be on that level anymore (and that idea definitely comes full circle by the end).

“She thinks of their concern, and suddenly wishes it were her own.”
I really liked this line as well, particularly because I think it’s really all Jane is, when you boil her down to her base parts. She is able to take care of herself, and she knows this. And so even at times, when maybe she should be afraid or cautious, she isn’t. And I bet (or hope) that the more we see of the show, the more she’ll have to learn to maybe take a step back. Not everyone’s invincible. I just really like the thought that Jane recognizes she should be more cautious, but that she can’t be, because it isn’t in her nature.

Anyway, sorry for my long ramble and my late review! Thanks for sharing the final version! :)

Excuse me. But this was a bit too... amazingly written. I've now read this three times. Never ever happened with any story before. And I read every word, didn't skip any. Not one.

I might have to read this again when the show goes on break. Please write more. Like ASAP. Because I don't know if I can survive the break.

well i that was the most perfect thing ever

I loved this, for a multitude of reasons! This was a really great showcase of the chaos Jane's mind is constantly in. You really capture that desolate, less certain part of herself that we don't see as much of on the show. And the scenario here is spot on, I really like the idea too of Tash using herself as a chess piece to redeem what she did, I could totally see her doing that and it just makes me love her even more.

And gosh, Jane and Weller in this, so, so good. Painfully good. You did such a good job painting them in this, I can see it all happening in my head. Thanks for a great read my friend.

Wow! Perfect and amazing.
I want to know what happens next! Please don't leave it as a one shot.

Ah I needed that! Great story!

Oh, what a lovely read, what a wonderful way to start the day!
I loved it very much, especially the delve into Jane's mind and her reaction to Weller's anguish.
Thanks for this gem

Beautiful writing.

. . I THINK I JUST DIED...YEP, MY GHOST IS JUST WRITING THIS!

AWESOME WORK DEAR; KEEP IT UP AND MAYBE DO A SEQUEL DEAR, HUH?! ;)

ARE YOU AS EXCITED YET SAD LIKE ME FOR THE FALL FINALE?!

I really like this! Definitely write more like it! You've been on my author fave list since Mentalist-keep it up! ;)

Wow! I am simply amazed how you can cough out amazing story after amazing story and I can't even seem to write one meager chapter for mine. This is awesome! I had a similar idea but I am infinitely glad you wrote it instead because the way you take these words and manage to paint a vivid and moving picture with them is phenomenal.
Jane's trip is bittersweet and the way Weller picks her up really makes you feel the waves of disagreement rolling off of him. The other two in the car are just like I'd expect them. And that was a great way to deal wit Tasha's 'problem'. Though I'm afraid there will be more disappointment and broken trust on the show.
I love this!