I'm trying to forget shes only 16. Frikin a tho Idk if I can. That would be pedophilia. I'm not sure I can continue. Good story overall but that bit is bothering me and I'm waiting for someone to be like "bro you think shes 16? Nah shes really 18!" But it aint happened yet.

I like what you did here overall and thought the story was laid out well and fairly easy to follow. Dialog wise, the characters were believable within TWD world. I'm particular to dialog but also know how difficult it can be when the readers are so protective of the characters, especially Daryl. There are a few grammatical errors here and there that attempted to pull me out of the narrative but you seemed to be well aware of them. I'm sure that's just the writer in me noticing. I see we share some of the same reviewers so it's always nice to see that people are still out there appreciating a good Bethyl story. I'm not one to read and not leave a comment so good job and keep writing.

Good job.

I'm kinda shocked he actually went for it!. Life I. Th apocalypse is short, gland he has found hope in Beth, but he needs to man up to Hershel.

Well that wasn't a happy reunion at all. Lol

Darryl is grumpy, but what good luck to find Andrea, Turese and Sasha.

Uggg poor Hershel!.

What the hell, is it Beth or...

His sadness is tangible. He needs Beth's light. This is the first time he comes to her.

So darn sad. Poor TDog.

Yeah Hershel knows something is

Fricken Merle to the rescue!.

Is Merle still alive?. Love Merle.

Yup she is still 16.

Beth is loosing it, but the world has gone to shit, if she don't handle her issues it will end her. Darryl is helping in his own way.