| Reviews for His hairpin |
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GrayBlueEyedBelle chapter 1 . 8/7/2016 I was sweet! There were quite a few things that I couldn't really understand by the way they were phrased, but I got the gist! Maybe look into getting a Beta reader to review and revise before publishing? Just to leave out any uncertainties with the audience. I suggest this because I've gathered that you are not a native English speaker and I can tell you do know a lot, but there are a few things you haven't quite got down yet. So don't give up! You're doing great! Anyway, again, this was really very cute! |
chadtayor020 chapter 1 . 11/21/2015 Very cute and shows character development of Shiemi for her to say that to a teacher. |