Really? Mary Sue?

This was a really good read.

chapter 42 is the same as chapter 41

Honestly I think Daisy should quit SHIELD. She's being incredibly stupid about her own abilitiesshe seems to think she can only use them for other people. Can only use them the way others tell her to.
She should be more than capable of inventing her own things. Programs, technology, so much more than mere tracing phones and hacking computers. JARVIS is a result of programming, and you've written Daisy as far better than Tony at code.
Stop shoehorning her into being a SHIELD agent, it is honestly too limiting.

My guess is they are making her look like Peggy Carter

Actually, she is 16. Not 15

Idk if you read these anymore, or care, but you had her placed in Honors Algebra II twice.

It appears that chapters 41 and 42 are the same.

Just an FYI, both chap 41 and 42 are the same.

Why does this say Chapter 42 when it should be 41, I feel like 41 is missing.

I'm sitting here rereading the story and just read daisy schedule and am now realizing the pure difficulty of the schedule ignoring all classes but AP Human Geography which I just finished and to jump in mid year is deadly, I didn't thank goodness but can't imagine doing it.

Oh, I get it now. I think both Shield and Natasha deserve a kick on the shin, though. And I looovee Natasha.

I think this is too harsh. Skye did much worse things in the first season as a part of Coulson's team and she was never threatened with anything close to the Sandbox. Remember the bracelet? This probably shouldn't even warrant that.

Regardless, this story is pretty great!

Chapters 41 and 42 are the same.

aurhors note
I don’t think they went to the academy for so long but I do think they worked at the labs as researchers and developers because in s1 they asked ward who he thought build all the cool gadgets and weapons
The bus was their first field assignment.