Great story so far. One of the best ones with an oc house. Hope to see you update soon.

...you spend all this time expanding on how great the Blackreynes and their people are as warriors and soldiers, and then you have Dalton make the idiotic mistake of playing with his opponent.

also, fighting Aegon on equal terms when he doesn't have to makes Dalton a fucking idiot, not some noble leader.

...wouldn't allow her pride to drive her from her home? sounds more like she allowed her pride to push her to betray her husband's memory and his family.

and if the Blackreynes were capable of having a letter and package left at Aegon's bedside, they were equally capable of slitting his and his sister's throats and stopping this war before it ever began.

really enjoyed this story. the world building aspect and the macro look at the events evolving is well done.

Pegasus in the jungle? What stupid pornography. And this one has 300 fans? I'm disappointed in people's minds.

Let me guess, the Dragons of Ulthos has attacked? Or raids from floating ice that is commandeered by the White Walkers is sighted on the Shivering sea? Or there is a nation attacking from the far west? Love this fic and kudos for updating X)

Yo I love it and about that Doommarine guy, he/she just a fucking idiot, your fanfic is awesome and I bet I’ll never find some thing as good as this again and seeing as how he or she only saw the first chapter, he or she have no idea how good it is.

No one wants to read about your stupid fu-cking mary-sues.

can't wait to see if u reach the dance of dragons or the blackreyne rebellion or Robert rebellion

No one ever dared disrupt the peace as long as Aegon Targaryen and Dalton Blackreyne are alive. After they are both dead however, the Faith Militant will rise. Rhaenys will be there to support her son Aenys Targaryen of course unlike canon. Visenya and Maegor may become a problem as they may see Aenys weak, even with Rhaenys help and who knows what will happen to her when the Faith Militant rises up. Not just them, Dorne as many will want vengeance, especially against the Blackreynes. The Vale, Jonos Arryn will mean to overthrow his brother. Wonder what Dalton and Rhaenys's children Daemon, Rhaenyra and Drayton will make a difference. Also, has Visenya had any children with any of the Blackreynes like Dalton for instance? Because its a shame for Visenya's line ended with Maegor.

This story is really good. I can’t wait to see what other changes you are going to make to canon. Keep up the great work.

they conquered Stygai? how? it is city of dead,right?

This chapter explained why you have updated this later in the year from the previous one, you have blended and explained the political, economical and architectual ingeniously and harmoniously. But have you considered posting this in SpaceBattles forum?

Where do the First Men like the Starks fit in the Whitehall's nationality scale, high or low

Please update as soon as possible ,the story has a lot of potential.