My eyes started burning as I read "Yukio's face then goes to scary furious. He draws his gun, aiming at Shima,",wondering what he would've done if Rin hadn't stepped in between!

MORE I NEED MORE

YUKIO DOES NOT APPROVE LOL

...I wish this one was a full-fledged story. This is awesome~!

Ok I liked it but the second chapter was confusing.

These are good... maybe do something medieval?

Noice

OMG *cries* WHYYYYYYYYYY *keeps crying* YOU DESPICABLE HUMAN BEING *cries harder* HOW COULD YOU, YOU ARE CRUEL *floods the room with tears, and grabs a chainsaw, and chases you still crying* YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!

ahhh shit please continue

Here's an idea: Rin needs help in class and Shima helps him, but gets some "ideas" in his head while their studying and then some kissing and yeah.

oh i like this. continue it olease

I like this so much!

ohhh in loving this. oh god this would be a whole fight scene maybe and rin trying to defend each others side. and shima totally being like "its totally what looked like" and rin yelling "not helping besides you fell onto of me and it turns into a whole you tried to rape my brother thing you know the whole sort of like crazy family renuion shabang.

THE ENDING XD

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH