That was so beautiful and sad! She dies at the end doesn't she?

My glob, this was beyond beautiful. The story pulled me in, and the emotion you put into every action and scene was blindingly astounding. Long Forgotten is certainly one of the best i've read in the noragami fandom, maybe even in the whole site. It made me cry, honestly, and i dont easily cry for just any angsty fic. It painted sad yet vibrant colors (the paradox is strong in this one)... I LOVED IT.

Overall: beautifully heart-wrenching.

You really have a gift for writing. The story that you wrote is so amazing. The plot is so fantastic I can't believe you actually transformed it into words. I just wish it didn't have to end that way and maybe the brown haired guy (trying not to spoil for others) could use Nora to reverse the effect by some strange turn of events.

Ok... I love it but also hate it. Was wonderfull until the end. For me was hearthbreaking enough that Hiyori was there but not like herself, and then you kill her. That was horeible and me cry. Bad person! T-T

I can feel how Yato feels in this story. Nearly or maybe really IC, this story is really good. I wonder what if you take Yato PoV, this story maybe will be more tragedic hehe..

This was so sad yet so beautiful, I actually cried... congratulations, your writing is truly amazing, I had tears in my eyes for the whole time! ç_ç

Goddamn, I have to admit, that was a clever Shinki name.
And oh lord, the ending. The fact that I predicted it doesn't make it any less heartwrenching.

To say I loved it would be an understatement but I do not have other words that would explain how much I loved reading this fan fiction. All the characters are fully IC, I loved every single word of it, I could feel their feelings while reading them. I couldn't stop the tears from falling when I reached the end.. Really, even now my vision is blurry. Even though I know this is how it was suppose to end, I really hope in the manga they'll find a way to have them together without having them suffering so hard. Such a wonderful job, hope you'll be doing more of it (maybe with a happy ending next time :P)!

Good evening !

I really liked your story, it was really well writen. So much feels ç.ç The end is so sad but also so emotional ! I agree with you, Hiyori being Yato's shinki can't bring any happy ending... I hope it won't happen in the manga.
Thank you for this OS !

You... You are a bad BAD person! But at the same time, ITOTALLY. FREAKING. LOVE dark/angsty stuff like this!

So many feels in this story.

Also, just finished reading/watching all of the Noragami anime/manga that has been released so far (in terms of subbed and/or translated to English manga) I could see this taking place shortly after chapter 58 of the manga (if I remember the correct chapter...)

I'd be interested in reading more of your Noragami works going forward!

This is so well written! I almost feel as though this is the real ending and I don't know if I'm happy or sad about it.. Brilliant story!

Oh wow, this was gut-wrenchingly sad in the most tragically beautiful way. I actually have tears in my eyes, so you definitely succeeded with this fanfiction. You portrayed all the emotions in such a raw, realistic manner, and I can only hope that the end to Noragami won't hurt as much as this. :'D
-Akira

'Love'. How appropriate. It was one of the truer names that she could have been gifted. Keep up the good work, dark

This, is just so sad :''(
Omg please update again soon.
I need to read moree
And I kinda hope she will remember her memories being shinki of yato.
:(