oh my god please please update this I really wanna know how this ends pretty pleaseeee

I loved this fanfic, it was absolutely amazing. you're such a wonderful writer, please update

This is an amazing story! I love the twist on the special abilities that Divergents have. The connect that Tris and Tobias have is well written and I really want to know who the traitor is. I not have good feelings about Mason. I am really thrilled at how Tris is working with her trauma. I know if this were to continue the showdown between Eric, Four and Tris would be tough. Hoping this gets finished. This is for sure in my top 5 fanfics!

I'm starting to lose hope that this incredible and unique story will ever be finished, after all it has been a little over 3 years since you have last updated it. It breaks my heart to realize that I will never find out what happens to our beautiful duo, Tris and bear. How sad for all the readers who where swept away from one of the best stories on . Take care of yourself. Hopefully one day you'll realize that this beautiful story that you created, deserves to be finished.

Omg, please update! I may cry if this story isn’t t continued! I will do anything!

I miss this story and am excited to see where it goes. Please take this off hiatus.

Continue. Please. Just a few more chapters. I know that is more work than just asking for it but i am desperate for closure on this story

Two long years without an update :-( Please come back and finish this .

I wish you would update one of my favorite stories on FFN. Your such a great story teller and it would be so wonderful to see what happens next for these two captivating characters. Please find it in your heart to complete this story.

Your story is beautifully written. I was surprised to see that it wasn’t done when i finished the last chapter. I hope you decide to come back and finish it. You are def talented with words.

Please come back T.T I need you and your story in my life!

This is such a great story - I hope you will update, i miss it !

I have been glued to my ipad for days reading this amazing story and (yet) still can't get enough of it ... only to find out that chapter 44 is not the end!( sadly for us all) - Truly remarkable and one of the best indeed for the Divergent Series in my opinion. Extremely captivating from the start, so well written, characters faithful to their personality, the plot a delight and such a disappointment that you did not find the time or inspiration to complete it... I for one will hope you will change your mind - it truly makes a fantastic and fabulous reading - WELL DONE. Chris.

Please, please update this story. I miss it so much. It's one of the best out there.

I stumbled across this story and now I am officially hooked. I absolutely love this story and hope maybe you would consider continuing it. I know it’s been awhile but, I would love to know what happens next.