Kamui would seem the type to do something like that, taking away the toy papi gave her and replacing it with his own, to move her affection to him...I guess. Those last few lines at the end were sweet, however. Her smile was all worth it.
I'm not sure if my first review made it, so this is actually a rewritten second review. Or comment. I have no way with words. I love the way you write, by the way. It needs improvement, but you worded Kamui's thought's and cruel morals very nicely.
I look forward to your next update.

Kamui would seem the type of person to do something like that, breaking the toy papi gave her and replacing it with his own to...move her affections to him, I guess.
I love the way you write, by the way. I should have commented when this first published, but I have no way with words.
I look forward to your next update.

Why does this not have more reviews ?This is one of the best gintama fics I have read! Author-san you made me so happy with this fic thank you.

Wow, that was amazing. I loved everything about it. I love how you characterized evil Kamui, I love how much of an asshole Umibozu was. I have no words for this. You did an absolutely splendid job on creating their hometown, how you emphasized on their poverty, how you put Abuto right there, how they all spoke!

This is one of the best Gintama fanfiction I've read and perhaps if this was proofread well, then it would be the legit best one.

Gosh. I can't believe this doesn't have much reviews because yoy deserve it!

Love it so much! Keep writing!

It's such a canon-ish story~ I love how you portrayed Kamui, it would make sense if he really is evil like this even from before. Though I didn't expect him not to break that stuff toy he got for Kagura, aw so cute . I love it, make more please~

Love it!