Pretty decent one here

Wonder how this would turn out

Make more chapters

ima be honest when people turtle with shield's...I think your a pus like really it's the most boring play style in game, I prefer to risk it and dodge it fill's me with euphoria, but your not me that's just what I think

Welp. Hopefully they can cure the curse properly using sheild hero verse magic, becuase keeping the Flame lit is only a delaying action and requires actions that are just as desperate as those of the divine beasts/good omens (aka killing a lot of people, gathering all the souls, and what's more, it's implied that keeping the flame lit is a BAD thing for the world in the long run.

I honestly loved this so far

Very well! This reader will wait for your glorious return! This story has been excellent so far, even going as far as almost being entirely an original story line of its own without too much influence of Rise of the Shield Hero and Dark Souls. I love it!

Nice work, but Cane-hero? Really? ;p

Interesting intro if a bit on the short side, well done.

HOLY SH*T NOAFIMI BECAME A GOD?!

This has potential, but please! Start a new line whenever someone else starts talking.

It is hard to read this when you have a conversation between three or four people in the same paragraph.

I ind this story more and more interesting

I like this chapter and I would say Go Girl! for protecting herself.

Hey guy!
This is a very good story!
Personally, since I read "The Rising of the Hero Shield" i also wanted to know what happened after that. So, I am really grateful with you!
I hope to read the next chapter soon!
I will be expecting for that :)

This is going to be fun love the made up game and love her shield logic.