Let him join and convince the others that he's not a demon...I wonder...how this is gonna turn out.

Good Story, continue the good work.

What a fantastic idea for a story! I am thoroughly hooked and can't wait to see where you go from here if you do continue. And please do continue!

Fantastic story, sad and very interesting. I do hope you reunite Thane and Shepard~ keep up the great work and I'll continue to read!

faily sure he and leliana are going too be fast friends in no time at all

Yay!

Looking forward to where you might take this!

Great job - I love how this story's going. I'm curious how Thane's nature as a materialized spirit will affect him, even anchored. How mortal is he still? What type of spirit did he form? Is he actually using ezo biotics, or simply (unconsciously) emulating the ability he had in life?

I think we all know that Solas and Thane will be come best friends. :)

Uuu... You can't end a chapter there! :D

Well done. I am looking forward to seeing how you resolve this, though I am a little disappointed that it looks like our favorite drell won't be getting a new adventure of his own... unless... :D

Looking forward to more!

Will Thane get to see and fight Corypheus?

I think you did a fantastic job of getting into Thane's head, here. I absolutely love the crossover idea you've begun, as well as the first part "In Her Dreams." I think you have done a wonderful job with the character voices. :-)

I would absolutly LOVE to see you continue on with this story and see where it goes. I have a friend that writes that has her outlines for her stories, but then her characters speak to her, as well, letting her know where they want to go with it. To the less imaginative, I guess that would sound a little "crazy," but I get it and figured you would, too. I wouldn't worry too much if you're unsure where it's going, to start with.

I was curious, in your bio, you said you were a Knowledge Based Writer and I wondered what that is, exactly? Is that like technical writing for essays? The other question I had, is: Are you also on AO3? You should be! I'm surprised you don't have more comments and follows on these two stories? Hope you'll consider adding AO3 to your postings. :-)

Again, love the story and hope to see more of it! Your writing is beautiful! :-)

if you can do more with this i will most likely read it.

i am interested where you are going with this

dude write a sequel where thane becomes the inquisitor that would be awesome then he could go back to Shepard alive!

Does Thane comes back to life?
Cause that would be badass if he does! :D

Definitely intriguing in its possibilities. I am curious where you thought to take it.
And, of course, well written! I enjoyed it.