Reviews for I will try to fix you |
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yaoiprincess101 chapter 1 . 8/10/2016 Ugh...So many feels...But great stories come from pained characters. I like this. |
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 1 . 1/19/2016 This was heartbreaking on a whole new level. How can fluff be this heartbreaking? ;w; |
Frostbert chapter 1 . 11/29/2015 oh god, i'm 99% sure that you just broke my heart or tore it to pieces, this fic hit it where it hurts |
Kaitlyn chapter 1 . 11/26/2015 Loved this little one-shot! |
PurpleSoda Kills chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 I like this yesh! Bro feels |
AmeGem chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 dang...poor sans |
Lady of the Sky chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 Oh, goodness. Sometimes a lie is much safer than the truth, but it doesn't always stay that way. It's good that at no point does Papyrus think Sans is trying to be cruel; he knows his brother loves him and only wants the best for him. Sans would probably have a hard time accepting help, too. Now I'm gonna go glue my heart back together. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 Wow, these feels They are too strong ;-; |
Chagrined chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 My favorite author! Writing MORE undertale? I'm so happy but this story makes me so sad |
Kat chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 Hahaha I'm definitely not crying right now. |
Clarrolx chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 You know I love you and all your work but WHY!? WHY WOULD YOU HURT ME THIS WAY!? *gross sobbing* Don't get me wrong, it's lovely and amazing as ALWAYS, but now I'm sad *( Thanks for the amazing(ly painful) read! Clarrolx |
MissJenca chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 Awwwwww! Sad feelz! Poor dears. So cute though. |
Lunacia chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 I don't know if this is going to be a oneshot or not but I hope you write more! This is so good! I love how you characterize Papyrus. Too many people treat him as just a comic relief character, so it's nice to see something in his POV |
staringatstars07 chapter 1 . 11/17/2015 Oh my god, this was amazing and wonderful and I am just so happy to see that you chose to write this from Papyrus' perspective. I mean, I enjoy anything and everything that you write, but you get their relationship so well. They care about each other, but they lie. Both of them. It's not just Sans. 1) They both want the other to be as happy as possible. 2) They both are willing to hide their own problems to ensure that their brother is as happy as possible. 3) Hiding their problems and suffering alone results in their brother also being miserable yet also not sure as to how to best approach the subject because their sibling is obviously uncomfortable with sharing. You completely nailed the hurt that comes with knowing you're being lied to, but I'm glad Papyrus recognized that it was never because Sans didn't trust him. He just wanted to protect him. |