Reviews for Random AU One-Shots
Charms22 chapter 10 . 7/27/2018
Fantabulous
Charms22 chapter 9 . 7/27/2018
So emotional and beautifully written
Charms22 chapter 8 . 7/27/2018
Aww FourTris
Charms22 chapter 7 . 7/27/2018
Natalies matchmaking plans are revealed
Charms22 chapter 6 . 7/27/2018
Awesome
Charms22 chapter 5 . 7/27/2018
So who was his wife?
Charms22 chapter 4 . 7/27/2018
Aww this one was so cute
Charms22 chapter 3 . 7/27/2018
Sweet one
Charms22 chapter 2 . 7/27/2018
Fabulous
Charms22 chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
Amazing
DauntlessMiraculer chapter 1 . 2/3/2018
That was so beautifully written!
Eunice339 chapter 10 . 6/20/2016
I can't believe you wrote this in 7th grade. I enjoyed your reimagining of the Divergent world and Tris' character as a Dauntless angel. A very unique take. I could see this as a graphic novel
Windchimed M-stories chapter 10 . 6/19/2016
This is extremely impressive writing for seventh grade! Frankly, it's better than most of the adult fanfics on this site. You, my dear, have talent.
Eunice339 chapter 15 . 6/16/2016
Simply beautiful. I'm so sad to see this one end. It was great discussing the story with you early on and I'm really glad that you extended it. I could see the progression of your writing, esp the flow and transitions, with each new chapter of this story that mirrored the progression of their relationship. Best of luck and I will continue to follow and read anything you write in the Divergent world.
Eunice339 chapter 14 . 6/16/2016
Great job. Loved the growth in their interactions.
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