Reviews for Severus' choices
javi30 chapter 45 . 9/7
Very good chapter.
Little Severus begins to reap the fruits of his labor, that's very good.
He also begins to have political weight, very influential in non-human races, which makes him a target for possible attacks, I wonder when the old school principal confronted him.
I would also like to know more about Petunia.
Keep writing.
Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.
JustNo chapter 40 . 9/6
A potion to help clean hair? Wouldn't it be ironic is this is what results in millions of galleons for Severus? What would even be better is if this results in no sales for the Potter's hair formula (I don't know if the potter hair formula canon or I've just read it in 50,000 stories). There is also all of the long lasting improved formulas that Severus had sold over the years. Maybe Lucius or one of his friends can coach him into how to form a corporation to produce these fortunes and hire other magical beings (maybe even squibs) to work there. He could be the reason behind people staying in the magical world after they graduate because there are more jobs available.
Silver Point Despair chapter 45 . 9/5
Very interesting. Potter and Potter-bis having Moody poke his nose into House Caspian. Dhaal keeping an eye on them. Needing another warrant to read papers locked in a drawer. I imagine Potters duo would see those papers incendio-ed accidentally on purpose.
Guest chapter 36 . 8/31
So Lily in other words is saying that all and all Dumbledore should be supported and if Severus wants to be her friend, he will need to suck it up because she is in love with bully #1. Let's hope he has enough of a spine left to tell her where to shove it.
Guest chapter 44 . 8/31
Yes, the Slytherins need help but getting rid of Dumbledore somehow (just how many students has he oblivated) would help with that. I think both Dumbledore and Tom need to be removed from the picture and someone else take their place. I believe that both Dumbledore and Tom are behind the deaths of elderly, prominent Lords/Ladies on their respective sides who opposed their extreme tactics. Why take risks for some person who will be still be unstable even after reuniting his horcroxes? Will that someone else be Severus (I'm wondering about the vision that the centaur mentioned a number of chapters ago) or will his doing something about those two idiots open the door for some moderate?
Guest chapter 43 . 8/31
So Severus needs a greenhouse. I'm sure his grandmother will supply him with cuttings for everything she has if he asks. And doesn't he have a goblin acquaintance who specialized in herbs and talked about working in the family forest? Also there is Thao Oku who would provide cuttings. Maybe Tuei knows other elves that are looking for a master and home who could attend the plants.
SB chapter 45 . 8/31
I like Severus' new name and the meaning he found for it! It was an interesting ritual.

For Lily's sake, I hope that James and Sirius grow up soon. At least Frank and Moody seemed reasonable. There doesn't seem to be a reason to suspect Severus of any dark magic.
Guest chapter 45 . 8/30
The Marauders and glorifying bullies and their two faced bearded leader is what I hated about the book series. Is there some way that Severus can gain more political clout than people like Potter Sr? Wouldn't it be interesting if the source of the Potter's cash flow is based on something under the control of one of Severus's new allies? I've always wondered about what happened to the seats of houses that are empty/not assigned because all of the members died or the members are muggleborn and have not been told their history/potential power. Can Severus claims those empty seats if no one else has? Better yet, if Dumbledore has somehow gained control of those seats because they were empty, have Severus claim them and take the seats from him.
LRSev chapter 45 . 8/30
Let your Goblin family know what happened too, Severus. I can see some nasty goblins wards put in place all around his property. Moody should look into just how many warrants have been influenced by Potter Sr and how many victims of the Marauders have been targeted. It's too bad that Severus didn't mention their part in the werewolf incident. Also, he isn't a powerless student anymore. Shouldn't he obtain the services of a pitbull lawyer who will sue when things like this happen? I would love to see both Potters lose their jobs and fortune. I don't see Lily sticking with Potter once he is as poor as Severus used to be and no longer has any status. I'm looking forward to Severus's first appearance in the Wizengamot and his locking eyes with Dumbledore.
JustNo chapter 45 . 8/29
Severus needs to consider some additional protection on Dhaal. I wouldn't put it pass Dumbledick's pets to try to kill/poison him just because they know it would hurt Severus. Also, he needs better wards like now. They know where he lives and they won't stop until they can destroy his home too.

I would think that every potion company/hospital in the world would be knocking on Severus's door to offer him a position seeing what he did for the Werewolves. Also wouldn't his grandfather have provided him (whether or not he chooses to use it) accounts at the bank for his education (retro back to his first year at Hogwarts) and to start a career once he connected with him again? Maybe this is something the goblins will discuss with Severus. Also, wouldn't his mother have accounts/monies that he would have inherited? I'm interested in whether or not Severus has aunts/uncles that are alive (in addition to the cousins his grandmother mentioned in a previous chapter). I'm also wondering how much of a Dumbledore fanboy this Moody is as of this moment in time. Please consider punishing the Potter twins for what they did (i.e. probation or being dismissed). Trying to get someone arrested/jailed based on false chargers should automatically result in dismissal of law enforcement officials. But maybe like in the real world, some police departments are corrupt.
weirdhead chapter 45 . 8/28
Heh! They deserved it.
Zharkhella chapter 45 . 8/28
Again, A lovely chapter.

I did notice some odd word usages, Several times you uses Assistance, whan I think you meant Assembly. And once you used Experimented rather than Experienced. I hope that is helpful.

I look forward to the next chapter.
Guest chapter 45 . 8/28
This chapter is GOOD. I just love how you weave in new aspects of Magic and how Severus is forming alliances (finally) with some really good beings. I'm so glad that he formed his own house and I'm hoping that his motto means that he cannot take the dark mark. Maybe Severus will eventually have enough money to buy all of Spinner's end (maybe also creating potion factories, greenhouses with exotic items, etc). I'm not surprised at all by the actions of Potter and Potter-bis. I'm thinking the next thing they will try is framing him.
raymond21 chapter 26 . 8/22
I love seeing petunia and severus become friend and helping petunia. after all, she is Lily sister. And petunia not being such a Bitch to severus,off course severus is gonna have good conversation with her
raymond21 chapter 25 . 8/20
Wow, i love to seeing good-voldemort. To see interaction between good slytherin and bad gryfindor. To see that wedding between narcissa and lucius
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