loving this story very nice blend

can you do the second season

nice very nice

While there are a few grammar issues as well as a couple odd placed words this was an amazing story. It was well worth the time to read and truly enjoy.

dude this is totally Sao all over again

My Gawd it's SAO all over again

I seriously enjoyed this story. It was absolutely awesome and I love how it's all about the virtual reality, which I am very interested in. The only thing I have to critique is your spelling and grammar. There were a lot of parts in the story where your spelling was off or there was a missing word or something. Sometimes, it just kinda messed up the flow and that's a pretty big problem, but besides that, I really love this story and you did an amazing job, keep up the good work :)

At least you didn't spell "lightning" with an "E".

A truly excellent book. I truly hope that you will write a sequel.

one of the best story... ever
seriously god

Hiccup ! Hiccup ! Oi ! Oi ! Oi !

I finished the story in a couple of hours.
I've watched the reference of your story so I pretty much know the plot. I was amazed when I saw slight differences from the original story, I mean you actually made a few twists so it could be a good story and that's cool.
I was disappointed when there was only Toothless and no other dragons, heck I thought the new game would be about dragon riders *sigh*.
There are lots of grammatical mistakes and a few typos which caused a lot of confusion when reading, but it's nothing that learning and practising couldn't fix.
Also, I don't like the smut scene, they're too bland and there are no tension. It's like doing a boring routine, you feel nothing exciting.
Overll, I like your story, but I don't like it that much to love it. Sure the story's great, but I feel that you lack something in the story that makes it more exciting.
That's it, I'm sorry if my words are harsh but I'm actually rather blunt. Also, I took the time to review so you could actually know what I thought about your story. Keep writing and improving!

Okay. I read the summary, and I have to say, Ha ha! That's clever what you did.

I just finished reading you harry potter and httyd crossover and this story and I've got to say that these are beyond great but I just want to point out that there are a few grammar mistakes through out the chapters in each one some were small but some were a bit harder to figure out I just wanted to let you know so that you can try to get better and make even greater stories

-Crazytiger999

I absolutely LOVED it... And when Astrid said 'she was the luckiest girl in the world', I can't help but add, 'virtual and reality'... Your stories are AMAZING!