| Reviews for The Child and The Bone (Moved to Ao3) |
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  J5 chapter 6 . 3/20/2016 Determine... |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/20/2016 ...lol |
| J5 chapter 6 . 3/20/2016 ...,...detemmienation |
| J5 chapter 5 . 3/20/2016 ...I...I'm unable to make a joke about determination... But I'm #determined to think of one. |
| J5 chapter 4 . 3/20/2016 #sans hoodie fills you with #dterminataion |
 APHUnitedNations chapter 7 . 1/6/2016 Amazing story, very poignant and in-tune with what Toby Fox wanted the players to understand after playing "Undertale". I can't wait for more |
| endertrree chapter 7 . 12/28/2015 Yayy chapter and omg sans and gahghhh and you got a puppy so cooooool what breed is she/he or opps um what sex is it? Awwww |
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/27/2015 Goood shit man! Good shit. |
| RJMeta chapter 7 . 12/27/2015 Welp. Frisk is definitely a better person than me. I would have just watched. |
| the indecisive bird chapter 7 . 12/27/2015 PUPPIES I really really liked this chapter Don't know why Probably because of the mercy thing .. I dunno |
| Char Mosirren chapter 6 . 12/25/2015 2 words. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW KAWAII! |
| Char Mosirren chapter 4 . 12/25/2015 :D that end though FriskxSans |
| BCE chapter 7 . 12/22/2015 Yay! It's totally fine to be going back and revising, and I'm very much excited to see you continue this one. As for art: holy hanna! I'll be looking for sure! . . . BCE |
| the indecisive bird chapter 3 . 12/22/2015 December 22 Wait a minute /checks calendar It's december 22 ... Okay then |
| BrokenChosenofEva chapter 6 . 12/22/2015 I'm gonna do a bit of back and forth, so I hope it's not confusing... . I love this, I truly do. . That said, please, please use punctuation and paragraphs a little more. It's often a little confusing having to read a section two or three times to figure out what exactly is being said, when a comma-or hypen- would help a lot. Not to mention how the various characters' dialogue is often chained together one after the other. . If FFnet is messing with your formatting, trying looking at the doc once it's uploaded to be sure it's still good. . But in the end, I love how you've written the characters. I'm really looking forward to what is coming in the future as well! This is a wonderful take on things, showing them settling into and adapting to the surface world. You've done great with the puns, as well as addressing the fact Frisk is _visibly_ 9yrs old, but much older mentally after all of their Resets. . . . BCE |
