please update

me gusta que incluyas a katase y murayama como personajes principales junto a naruto eso da una perspectiva nueva e imnovadora a la historia continuala me emociona como haras que naruto derrote a riser sin ser de la comunidad de rias y ver si esta es seducida finalmente por naruto la fiesta que armaran sus novias jajajaja.

super

haren rias, aheno, irina, xenovia yes yes

me gusta el hecho que las chicas principales sean secundarias le da un gran interes a la historia continuala

Blegh, this lesbian shit is distasteful. Why did you add it? It could be much better without this crap.

Being the contradictionary reader.
I would have liked him getting conned like this into the peerage.
I don't really see any believable it will happen now.

You shouldn't be writing the story you dont want because it is yours not others. I want to read your story, your idea. But still good story though

10/10! Loved it

this is amazing keep going at the rate u r and go with the flow

While I think naruto should expand his harem with raynare and Rossweisse and Risa and anako for his girlfriends. And I'm not sure if naruto should commit himself to one faction maybe have him be a small group or something just because don't name it akatsuki if you do. And if you make naruto a devil make his like a Phenex but instead of Phoenix powers give him thunderbird powers.

Good chapter, glad to see an update :D

A very good story, and please to go on, I really want to read it.

Great chapter. Personally I think you should have Naruto expand his harem to a much larger number. You seem to be able to get the different interactions across with no problem so it would be great to see all the ladies falling for him and the ways they will do it.

Awesome chapter!