brilliant story, it touched my soul

This was just a really touching story; I loved the way you showed the interactions happening between Hachiman and the various females that he knows

oh shet~

Thanks for writing.

update v: now

v,,,: update

Okay story, but nice idea!
Except "Sagami's choclate", it didn't sit well with this fanfic. Too unnatural!
May be, had you made her OOC, then it would have been atleast a bit acceptable.

Other than that, all okay!

"It seemed more nut than chocolate. But I least I liked nu-"
Stop.
BEST LINE EVER XD I snorted when I read this. I liked how much thought you put into considering the kind of chocolate each girl would give. (Ebina's especially lmao)

Well, this certainly was a great fic! And so many puns and references!

For Orimoto's chocolate, my best guess would be that the bitter to signify her regrets? Or maybe that she doesn't feels the need to add anything to what they have? I'm not really sure.

Your favorite pairing would be probably Yukinoshita (8man reaction to her chocolate) or Kawasomething (the largest scene and best interaction), but I'm going to pretend it is Iroha, it's my favorite pairing right now, you knoooow?

Anyway, great fic! I only ask for a White Day fic based on this!

I am glad to see my humourous comment about Ebina's chocolate being put to good use.

So Kawasaki makes chocolate suitable for children? Makes sense because she would probably share the leftovers with her siblings and little gilrs like Keika usually do not like bitter chocolate.

The MAX coffee taste Isshiki was going for seems very calculated but also very enticing.

I am not really sure what you were going for with Orimoto's chocolate, however. It might be a reference to TheRedGhillie's story where Orimoto drinks her coffe black or it is simply an expression of her personality because the more bitterness (i.e. cocoa) a chocolate contains - the closer it is to a honest representation of the main ingredients.

In contrast, Yuigahama's chocolate is honest about herself. Her clumsiness in culinary matters and her dissatisfaction with her station are quite nicely captured.

Yukinoshita is still the mystery, eh? The (almost) perfect girl and cornerstone of so many threads in the story of Oregairu once again manages to beat the competition without revealing too much and unable to win decisively.

The ending could have used a bit more crescendo and maybe a bolder climax. I will not neglect to mention that this is quite hard with the roster of available characters and Oregairu's close resemblance to realism. However, the most "outrageous" thing were Haruno's actions and if you could have managed to top that the satisfaction at the end might have been bigger. Not that this is a bad ending in itself - it is more like milk chocolate when I expected to get a chocolate truffle at the end - something similar in nature but creating a dissonance between expectation and the actual execution.

wait wait wait a moment. there a volume A to volume N? Oh my God where have I been lately with Oregairu. Please tell me where to look these volume up and a place with the English translations!

thx for the story!

I got an idea but i can't write shit.

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in summary : hachiman blurts out everything he's thinking.

i think you can pull this off

Good read

Awesome fic but a weak end

hachiman gave komachi a list of the people who gave him chocolate, a bad mistake, now komachi can give them chocolate from hachiman on white day because she knows he would never do it.
is this your way of saying we will have a sequel?