Reviews for Harry Potter's most excellent adventure
The Morphin' Physic4ist chapter 2 . 7/11
Just saw Saissa's review of this chapter (May 21) and had to correct it. A parsec is the distance at which an object has a parallax of one arc second as measured from a baseline of the earth's orbit, and is about 3.25 light years The sun is only about 8 light minutes away.
Talonwalker chapter 21 . 6/27
Great story!
mckertis chapter 3 . 6/24
Too much banter - not enough substance.
Rune Tobor chapter 21 . 6/10
The only flaw I found was you did not explain what a TER was.
I Googled STARGATE WIKI TER and found out but a sentence or three of explanation would have been nice.

Thanks for writing, posting, sharing your story with us.
Rune Tobor chapter 19 . 6/10
Bill and FLOUR ? ? ?

Are you using speech to text software?

Fleur is french for Flower however ... so its almost right.
Rune Tobor chapter 18 . 6/10
I have a story seed.

Imagine a Goddess from Ah Megami Sama finding the Ori and Ancients, she'd be disgusted!

A TRUE GODDESS, forcing them to ACT!

A Being capable of single handedly creating or destroying Entire Galaxies...
Rune Tobor chapter 17 . 6/10
While I never watched the show I prefer to read and found a criticism of the way major enemies were defeated.

Various aliens basically committed suicide to save the stupid, greedy, corrupt, humans...

The writers really didn't think.

I prefer your version, even if Harry is doing all the heavy lifting.
Rune Tobor chapter 13 . 6/9
Oh, everyone cry a river, some murdering purebloods died!

The wizzy world is corrupt and rotted to its core, rather like terminal Cancer.

Destruction followed by rebuilding is the way to go.

Read THE BRITISH REFORMATION and WIZARDS FALL, two great fics on this site.
Rune Tobor chapter 12 . 6/9
Sterilization of the entire Ori galaxy might work...

All life needs to go, every cell, every virus, leave the Ori without any worshipers.
Rune Tobor chapter 10 . 6/9
Nuking (or otherwise atomizing) Malfoy Manor from orbit is OUTSTANDING!
Rune Tobor chapter 8 . 6/9
Better than the Millennium Falcon!

Private ships with the power of a heavy cruiser are fun!

But easy to destroy if the shields fail...
Rune Tobor chapter 6 . 6/9
They haven't done anything to him YET!

Although this Albus may not be Dumb as a door...
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 6/9
Kidnapped!

Thay is a new way to drag someone into SG-1.

You don't have to have a detailed outline when you start, but it helps.
Kris chapter 10 . 6/5
Wouldn't the Malfoys have more than one elf? No offense to Dobby, of course.
L30 tH3 L1on chapter 14 . 6/5
Loving the story finding it very entertaining
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