This was great. I would have loved for Bella to go Edward's way of feeding and go against the Cullens. In my pervy imagination only, that happened. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.

LOL yes I certainly did enjoy. What a neat little twist at the end. A second chapter would be most welcome and a third and a...…! :-)

Such an interesting deviation from the norm!

This is a delightful change from the average Edward we know and love. He has more personality and backbone but as ever, Bella rules his world.
Judy

Theres a few things that I don't get. Edward is nothing but a boy, yet you have him ruling the vampires in America? Not likely. I also don't get what he meant about him being able to control people. I hate his attitude. I hate how used up he is. And it saddens me that you would want THAT kind of guy for bella. She deserves much more then this disgusting man whore.

Riveting & yes please. I so want to see her tame him.

100th review...;)

Great angsty story! I liked the Villain!Edward tamed by Bella story... A sequel would be nice...

I ️ it.

Would love to read more of this story. Thanks for sharing it.

for a 2nd chapter I loved this one...edward out manuvered like he did with aro lol

Wonderful read! Loved the amount of time passing over a short amount of writing!

Omg please continue this amazing story

Def OOC here, but I loved it! You came up with some new tricks & delicacies, which I also enjoyed.

I liked it. I'm just not used to seeing Edward as the villain. It was a good story though. how he got brought to his senses because of love. A very different story to the other two that I've read of yours. Now I'm going on to the next one in your list. One thing I would like to see is a future take on this story, or at least what happens next. From where you've ended it I'm guessing Edward succeeds in being with Bella, but is this the case! Hhmmm...