| Reviews for CRUSH! |
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   eprince200 chapter 1 . 6/19 love this! can't wait for more! |
| JustAnotherFan217 chapter 1 . 5/18 Love it. Really wish you had decided to continue this. No one ever does a different paramecia Luffy, it’s always Logia or a Zoan. The gravity fruit is awesome as well, loved the moves and the way this went. Great one shot, hope you continue it at some point. |
| Veldora Dragneel chapter 1 . 4/3 ryu ryu no mi, model: occidental dragon, take natsu dragneel powers XD |
| A Simple Library chapter 1 . 3/1 really hoping for you to continue... but seeing when you published this...well, I can only sit and wait for a miracle to happen... |
| harashien chapter 1 . 2/8 I love this and can’t wait for more if possible |
| david.teague.3950 chapter 1 . 1/29 Well I've got a couple ideas, first Byrndi World's fruit the Moa Moa no Mi it is perhaps the second strongest Paramecia fruit of the series. The second idea is Energy Energy fruit it's a Paramecia Fruit that allows the user to create different types of Energy from a simple ball of energy, to shooting wave beams of electricity with homing effect, to creating balls of slow moving sub-zero energy, and a short range but seriously dangerous Plasma blast. All that's really needed to use the different energies is for Nojiko to make the right hand motion. An example would be three fingers curled into a fist while the index fingers are extended forward into a "point" and the thumbs are extended as if giving someone a sideways thumbs up, for the simple balls of energy. Or the hands splayed for the electrical waves...you know what just look up the icons for Samus' Power Beam, Plasma Beam, Wave Beam, and Ice Beam from Prime one, it's actually where I got the idea for the Devil Fruit. |
| Masashi chapter 1 . 1/25 Fuck you cunt |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 Loved it ,wish it was the whole story though |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2019 Shame you aren't going to finish this one |
| Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 whoa.. this is.. what is this?! i really love this story of yours , i really Hope a Sequel for this! i really am.. |
| wolfbane chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 Excellent story. I am curious on what the devil fruit had they got from Arlon is, thoughts of sexy kitty comes to mind but I am a perv. I understand your reasoning for not posting the lemon. Hope to read more |
| WereWolf2000 chapter 1 . 6/3/2019 I know you probably won't, but I would love to read more of this. |
| Frydaddy chapter 1 . 4/3/2019 It’s unlikely that you will but please continue this it is very good |
| crazzyredhead chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 Why... Please update soon this is super good... Can't wait for more keep it up. |
| Jake334 chapter 1 . 1/28/2019 I'm excited for the next chapter. |
