Please update this story too you are an amazing author

I'm so glad Harry and Ginny were able to get away. I hope they get out of the country safely. Hope the rest of that family are ok. I can't wait to read what happens next.

That was horrible. Thank heavens for the neighbors, but how excruciating for them all. I desperately hope they made it through safely. My heart bleeds for all of them.

What a weird twist to the Death Eater attacks. I’m worried now about their return trip to their house.

Damn, that was gut wrenching!

ok.. this guy just leaving his little girl alone doesnt make any sense, he knew Harry and ginny had to go away since they were the cause for the attack. he could just as easily drop off H/G and keep his daugther, drop her anywhere else with anyone he knew...

two other things i think you might like to correct in previous chapthers:

first: fred and george got in this fight about how fred never told him about hermione.. except that he did tell him! in chapter 10 george realises freds feelings, and fred literally said "yes, I fancy hermione" and then george tell him to go after her since ron had never made a move.

second: the daily prophet! in chapter 8 harry bought one and then "organised for them to have a daily prophet delivery" but we never hear of this again. they never received them no matter where they where.. We actualy see them in multiply chapters risking their safety going in wizards places just to buy the paper (sometimes others things too, wich is foolish! stop going places where you know your being hunted for!)

In this there are a fill things to consider: we know they deliver DP with owls(but i imagine if you are a muggleborn living with your parentes in a muggle neighborhood its possible they have a system in place to deliver it like muggles postmail) you would either have to leave your name for the owl to find you(which they couldnt do) or your adress(more probable), but if you give a fake name I imagine magic would still do its job and locate you with an owl.

those two things are easy to correct, i imagine.. just erase the part where harry said he was arrenging to have the paper delivered and erase the scene where greg and forge talked about hermione. there might have been other stuff, but those two are the ones i remember now

i just found this fic and read it in a day, i like the idea but at the same time i have to say its really slow going.. i mean: 21 chapters and only 2 or 3 months have passed. a lot has happened and at the same time nothing did. chapter 21 could just as easily be chapter 5, "follow them across the world" 21 chapters and we remain in england? they lived in 3 different houses but other than switching from sleeping in separete beds to sleeping together nothing really changed..

and then the familys.. they say they are looking for harry and ginny and they need to clear their names but we never really see anyone doing anything to acomplish that. harry is being acused of killing umbridge and no one even talked about trying to find who really killed her?! we never see anyone researching for spells that might help locate someone, bill and fleur work at gringotts and not one conversation about trying to talk with the goblins or check if harry still have acess to his bank accounts (even if the goblins refuse to answer, they could just talk with the resposible for his accounts and leave a letter to harry (to be delivered on the possibility that they appear on the bank)

dumbledore desapeared, voldemort too, everyone was arrested for weeks.. just to be set free ... the thing is.. i have no idea where the fic is going, not because is a mistery, but because it really doenst look like its going anywhere?

i like your writing but i feel as if im waiting for the fic to begin. we already learned that wandless magic exists, and i though this would play a big part in the story (it doenst make sense to introduce something like that for no reason) and then we got harry and ginny for 3 months learning about muggle history and how to drive... how is he going to defeat voldemort? they gonna leave the country not having a clue about the profecy and that harry have to face voldemort? how are they going to reconnect with their familys? they didnt found each other while living in the same country, imagine in another?! how hard would it be for them to buy an owl? just to send one message letting sirius know: "hey, were alive and doing great, food, clothes, a roof, we got it all", even if it couldnt find them back(supposing magic has a way to know you dont wanna be found, but then again, sirius could be found when he was on the run, so i guess it just doesnt make any sense that not on single person tried sending them a message to them, wich they didnt.

im trully sorry if anything i said might sound harsh, that is not my intention (i guess when i start writing is hard to stop), i truly enjoyed the reading, i just think you might be a little lost but im hoppefull and I will keep reading!

also: im from brazil, so im sorry if there are many mistakes in here

Really nice story.

Yikes, I’m glad Harry and Ginny were able to get away

great chapter

Yep that's Hermione for you not only did she treat Harry like crap now she's driving a wedge between the Wesley Family. Damn you show Hermione like she was in the books she is so evil. If I would ever write a Harry Potter story I'd show her as Voldemort's 2nd or maybe 3rd in commend right behind Bellatrix that's how evil she is in the books.

I just can't get into this Fred and Hermione thing Fred is a free spirit, Hermione is a bossy know it all. Fred would and did lay down his life for someone, Hermione in the Deathy Hollows to save MR. Lovegood put Harry's life in danger by showing him to a bunch of deatheaters. Since then I reread the books she is almost as evil as Voldemort and Dumbledore. You are a brilliant writer that is the only thing I don't like about this story keep up the good work.

Harry and Ginny forever
Monty Potter the Auror is James Potter's father you where doing so great what happened? Earlier you had it right when you said his Dad's name was Fleamot but he was a potion master and inventor so I had to skip that mistake you made ,hopefully you don't have James and Serius as Aurors because it takes 3 or 4 years to become one and they left Hogwarts when they where 18 and James died when he was 21 but in hiding for like a year so there is no way they could have been aurors. Hopefully if you read this you'll edit that part out of the story and JK Rowlings said that James's parents were old even old to wizards when James was born so they would have been over 100 years old then so he was never a auror. Still a great story hopefully no more mistakes like this one

Since Serius comes from a very dark family Serius has to know dark spills you could scare the living shit out of Dumbledore by having Serius look in his family library and find a spill to bring back James and Lily maybe just for a little, image Dumbledore blaming Harry for something then Lily comes into the room. Dumbledore would have a very big brown spot on the backside of his robes and a poodle at his feet. Remember you don't mess with a momma bears Cubs when the momma bear is around unless you want to get hurt. Dumbledore does needs to be put in his place,after all who gave him the power to put harry are the dursley's,who gave him the power where harry has to spend his holidays he is not God he might think he is but he's not. Here is away the spell can work have Serius cut his hand put it over his heart and say in Latin "with my blood I call forth my (friend/brother not of blood) James and Lily Potter " and have him do it in front of Dumbledore but have so that once the spell is started it can't be stopped or have Serius also bring back Fleamot Potter and his Wife really make Dumbledore shite bricks. Then have Serius ask Dumbledore to repeat what he said about Harry to his Parents and Grandparents. Now that I would love to read I have been looking for a story like that for years but I can't find one where Dumbledore has to answer to the 4 senior Potter's for how Harry had to grow up

Harry and Ginny forever

Finally someone gets James's Dad's name right thank you. you just became one of my favorite authors

Harry and Ginny are perfect for each other

Aw man you are frickin awesome for coming up with this plot been looking for a story like this for awhile don't know I didn't find this earlier