I can't even...
I can't even express how true this must be for the both of them.
I've researched some stuff on the X-Men movies and nearly everyone part of them says that the whole movie franchise is basically a love story between Charles and Erik.
I can't for the life me explain how believable this story was. I could see it being something that would happen when neither of them were on screen XD
Thank you so much for this entertaining piece of art. I very thoroughly enjoyed it.

OHHHHMYYYGOOOD, that was incredible, thanks for the sharing! Have you planned to write a next chapter?

Oh my god, I adore it.

Oh my garden. I'm not sure if I want to laugh or cry. Poor Erik :*D Generally I don't like reading smut...but the concept of this story is just... sakfjeskagunalrtnalktn. I want to steal it. I want to steal Charles's mind foreplay! I want it! I want more fanfiction D: What do I do? Waiting is no option. I MUST KNOW WHAT HE IS DOING!
...Anyway, update soon, m'kay?

You need to tell people this is Cherik in the summary - the way you have it now, it looks like it's Raven-centric and Charles and Erik won't get together - I only tried your fic on the off-chance that there might be mention of 'what might have been'. No one can read the second chapter if they don't get thru the first.

As for the writing, it's a little rough, but you do have some good ideas and evocative imagery, so I'm willing to go for your ride.

And have you seen the "Graham Norton Show" when Fass, Mac and Jackman were on together, and Mac said essentially said that while he thinks the fanart fantastic, "if anybody's giving it" it was unmistakably him to Fass - look it up.