Wow flash I LOVE THE SHOW

Dude, this is like flash but white different characters and a high school setting.

Great story cant wait to see what happens next

Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter

Just keep writing with hints of flash in it like you've been doing but have him talk off snot out or call him out. I'm telling you this because I like this story so far and want it continued.

this is awesome but are going to have him as a villian because at the end of this chapter you basically putting him as a villian

Maybe this is hiccup's inner anger talking to him when he is bullied sometimes anger can create bad things you would like to do to them but never really could do?

Please, don't let Hiccup go down the dark road.

Well, it looks like Hiccup has some good problems to solve.

Try adding in a part where hiccup gets mad and shows sontbag who's boss

This is getting good

Interesting so far

Hello. :)
At first I want to say that the idea of this fanfic is very interesting but the implementation isn't the best. when Hiccup wakes up he is... to calm? Because I will overreact and I'm a lot quieter person than he is. And why do he know that he was nine months in a coma? Because no one said that from the doc's. And that everyone thought that he is dead is a bit unrealistic because I don't think there was a funeral for this guy and yeah. And all of a sudden Astrid had romantic interest in him? That is a bit odd, because before this incident she ignores and betrays him and now he is to friendly to everyone? (But I love Hiccstrid, by the way.)
But I like the part with the abs that was funny! :) And where is Toothless? I want to see him! Maybe as a human? That would be interesting.
Sorry for all the negative things but I want to say that to you because I think it's important to know what you could do better the next time, you know?

And sorry for every grammatic mistake, but I'm german and it is hard to write in another language than my native language. But I try and you should do that too. Good luck!

See you later, alligator.

hahaha
I've all ways wounded what would happen if hiccup became hot all of the sudden :)

Well, Hiccup has game. Please keep going.