Really intense and fantastically written.

love this!

so, that was amazing. poetically amazing and beautiful and perfect. I love that they're real and they fight, but they love deeply so it all works out. tremendous writing, truly, thank you for sharing!

This was so, so wonderful and so well written. I loved it.

This was really quite lovely.

This was absolute perfection. Perfect snippets, perfect amounts of floof and smut and real life feelings. And I lovelovelove when Luke takes the lead in the bedroom. Well done.

There was such good characterisation here - really nice work :)

This was so beautifully written. Loved it completely.

Thank you for writing it!

That was beautiful. Thank you.

Loved it! Wish we could've gotten more depth on each, that would've been even more awesome, nonetheless it was beautiful!

I read this story a lot. It's so beautifully written.

really enjoyed it! especially the scene on the porch.

This is so beautiful. They're such a fantastic couple and this was so elegant and beautiful and them. All of it was just...it just was them, and I know that doesn't make any sense, but it was so in character and gorgeous and I almost cried a few times reading it. Well done.

That was great. You captured their essence.

Love how you languorously draw the picture of their love and commitment in terms of their expression of passion. Sexy, intense and powerful.