what if tht childhood friend was kageyama?! also i love how he's a sweet badass, pls update!

how do uk he'll treat it properly? go with him!

King of the highschool, intrestn

Go, Kageyama! Stop the evil bullies!

Thank you for sharing; didn't notice any severe spelling mistakes.

Thanks for the update! Sorry for the later than usual review, I was at a writing convention. Just something to remember: dialog is the lifeblood of the story! If you can make the dialogue sound good and aptly reflect the characters' personalities, your story will be that much better. Seriously though, thanks very, very much for updating!

Well done! I enjoyed how realistic it was, and especially how Kageyama, a player on the volleyball team, got his captain to help deal with things. Do you plan on continuing? I wonder how Hinata will plan on getting over the mountain...

If you're starved for ideas, maybe you could have another beating and from then on Hinata is sheltered in the volleyball club's gym? I think it'd be a nice way to make Hinata like volleyball, even if he doesn't play it. In fact, what if Hinata eventually joined the volleyball team? It would make for an awesome backstory and open up a new window for your stories.

Sorry if that seemed kind of backseat-driverish, this story just has a lot of potential as a unique story instead of one of the generic "Hinata is bullied, Kageyama gets mad, Hinata is attracted to Kageyama, they get together" stories. PM me if you want more details though!

Now i don't know if you have abandoned this or not but this plot is interesting i think you should really consider continuing it.

This is nice I like it! poor Hinata! I hate bully's.

Ah. Another interesting one