Okay, so reading through all of this, I want to point out some stuff that I found slightly appalling.

1. The way you suddenly thrusted in the fact that your OC holds the seven tails (which, no.) was out of left field and not a way you build up a character.

2. ITACHI IS SO FUCKING ABUSIVE. Please, PLEASE do some research about abusive relationships because I'm concerned that this is how you feel romantic relationships should be. It's not.

3. That whole storyline with Kabuto wasn't really brought back, and the fact that your OC either aborted the baby or like...what? It wasn't made clear. Also, what were Kabuto's plans for raping her exactly? She has the sharingan, so like he didn't really need to impregnate in order to get them.

4. Your OC's 'dreams' don't make sense, and really don't have any place in the story.

5. The 'sex' scene with Itachi and your OC are EXTREMELY UNREALISTIC. Women don't 'gush essence' and men don't cum multiple times in a span of minutes. There needs to be some sort of refractory period in there. Also, she shouldn't be bleeding so much that the water turns pink, it wouldn't be pleasurable for your OC AT ALL. Itachi's doing something VERY wrong.

All in all, I'm excited to read more.

I would highly suggest proofreading or finding someone to proofread your writing because there are a lot of grammatical errors.

Thank goodness I read fast now. *me reading the story* Gotta go fast!
*cough* Now with the story. You hit me right in the feels when Amillia finally got a family i'm glad shes with Itachi and Sasuke but things got darker as I read more chapters. I can't believe Kabuto pregnant Amillia chan when she was twelve! :0
Poor girl... I need to do a research if girls can get pregnant at that age.
Now with the complements!
You're story is getting amazing and very dark! (It means great since this is focusing of that) And that lemon though... *blushes and grins* Love. It. *get rid of the nosebleed with a tissue* I love everything of this story keep going!