First things first: Thank you for sharing this fanfic with us :) I like the idea and I am pretty interested in how you will build up the HancockXOC romance. Hopefully not like one of these "Oh she's the most beautiful being on earth, gotta get into her pants right this very second." Also, the new skills she has - like suddenly being able to read peoples' minds pop out pretty unexpected - which makes her kind of Mary Sueish in my opinion, sorry about that. Also the grammatical and spelling errors are sometimes a little distracting while reading would be neat if you used a spelling error check :)

I love the title to this one! And especially how you implemented nursury lyrics into your first chapter! I really enjoy this storyline-never really thought about writing from the perspective of of someone other than the two main characters! Looking forward to more!

Very interesting thus far, you're characters are very unique and seeing a unique change in Fallout as we see the characters from Vault 111 struggle survive the Wasteland. Now am very curious to see how you handle the factions, cause well let's face it the big three have problems.

The Brotherhood of Steel, let's face it their repreating mistakes of the past as shown with how Teagan wants handle dealing with settlements, something I could actually Elder Maxson not being too happy about given how he wants things be handle but who knows. Arthur Maxson himself despite having done great things for Brotherhood, is still very young and has learn, his only freaking 20 years old! The pressure is already getting to him as shown in some actions. What Arthur needs is outside Influence away from BoS, someone make him realize things, someone make him see what Elder Lyons saw in the Pitt all those years ago. If they don't, things are gonna get bad, I do truly miss how they were under Elder Lyons despite his own flaws.

The Railroad while they are good people, they have their own problems. They allowed their fears get better of them and have shown do reckless things as when Brotherhood arrived. The main problem is how they handle Synths memories, while I do understand that is almost taking away someone's freedom away and replacing it, let's not forget about that Synth who become a Raider. Still, overall their good people, just got their problems, their spies, not soldiers.

The Institute is the worst though. They represent one of the very reasons why the world ended, they focus so much on ends means justify that they do more harm then good. The fact their the reason why there's Super Mutants in Commonwealth shows yeah their almost bad as the Enclave! Despite what some in Institute say, they are not Humanity's hope, they look to future and sacfrice their humanity in process. Still not all do deserve judgement, it is shown not all are aware of what their high ups are doing, so there's that.

The Miniutemen to my opinion are best hope for the Commonwealth as they only want help the people, no hidden bullshit and whatnot, just want peace and justice for the people. That's why I feel their ending is the best one pick with peaceful. But that's up to you, perfectly fine how you chose it.

Another thing I wouldn't mind seeing is mention of the Lone Wanderer and the Courier, it bugged the hell out of me we never got hear anything of the Lone Wanderer. Come on why the Brotherhood wouldn't mention the Wanderer is beyond me, he/she is the reason why the Brotherhood is such a powerhouse now since they pay the way for them when fighting the Enclave. Always bugged me.

Overall good work, liked what you did thus far. If you're interested, got few suggestions if you want? Up to you. Good luck, till next time.
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So awesome. Love it!

Loving it so far. Love the character and the concept of her being telekinetic. Love what happened with the deathclaw. I love them so much even though they scare me to death. I really hope you write more and soon!

I always wanted to play Fallout but don't got the money right now but imma enjoy the story

Very interesting hope you can continue :)

Oh my HEAVENS please keep writing. Please.

Interesting. I'm actually wondering though, is your female main character (OC) going to be using 'chems', become a 'druggy' *no offense*. I was just thinking to see how that would turn out with Hancock. Because i notice you have the OC and Hancock together, I was wondering how it would look if a non-chem using character ended up Hancock. I was just thinking it would be interesting to see that. I'm just curious if you are planning on it, but if not bo problem. Just curious.
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Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!

Ooh, a telekinetic in the wastes, sounds intriguing. I hope you update, do tell us more. :)

Now I'm not a big fan off ghoul action but I love this story. I defiantly read more if you write more. Please do!

THis is really good! i hope you continue this!

Very interesting! I hope up can update soon.

Love love love please update soon