| Reviews for The missing son |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/17 Option one please. It would be good like that. |
Trash chapter 2 . 4/22 Yep this is trash |
Legalt chapter 2 . 4/22 I dream of a day where people stop ruining their fics with huge harems. Unless it's mostly smut, all it accomplishes is leading the fic to quick abandonment. By doing that, you can barely write decent romance and definitely can't develop the characters well. Then managing all of them and their roles in the story... It leads to such fast writers block and loss of motivation... Yeah, I will never understand how authors can be so idiotic. And I'll never understand why readers follow these fics, EVEN IF they're, like this one, written well. You're just setting yourself up for inevitable disappointment as 9.5 times out of 10, the fic will either have HUGE update gaps or become dropped entirely... As is evident by this one. Anyway, this IS well written, but hopefully you learned your lesson. I know how hard it can be when writing a harem where you like so many females, but you HAVE to either decide from the beginning on your own, or set a limit and let the reviews decide within a chapter or two. 3-4 is ideal. 5 at the absolute MAX. It becomes manageable and can be planned well. Good luck, author. You really have potential to do great things. |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 6 . 4/20 Option 2 would be better overall even though option 1 is more flashier... does naruto have sage mode? He has the rinnegan so he should consider using senjutsu. Please update soon though! Can't wait for the next chapter! Love the tobi impersonation. You forgot to do that in his fallen angel battle! It would have been better if he had done that. More longer lemons too please! |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 3 . 4/20 Team 4 should be gaara and han. You know kokuo's jinchuuriki? It would be a good close range- long range combo! |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 1 . 4/20 Tobi naruto please! |
Chronosign chapter 6 . 2/16 Could you add Acnologia to the peerage as Tiamat's twin and Gaara's partner. Oh, and ask yourself this, "If you want someone in to be in a peerage that has already reached their full potential and can't get any stronger than they already are, would a single pawn be enough?". Ya know, because the evil pieces look for power and potential, that why Issei was worth so much. |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/9/2019 Update |
willow1996 chapter 5 . 11/21/2019 Hope you update soon |
indra-otsutsuki01 chapter 1 . 10/14/2019 Rossweisse in the Naruto Harem please |
Wolf1741 chapter 6 . 9/8/2019 Option 2 is better |
flaashii chapter 6 . 8/25/2019 oiiii come on update this fic it is really good :D |
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 6 . 8/17/2019 update |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2019 The fuck Mann. Are you still alive? Please continue this story soon. |
god of all chapter 6 . 7/26/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |