Ahh, reading this made me want to write more Zephyr again! I love Zephyr's and Leanne's dialogue in this story. Each of their lines-rebuttal, retreat, and rejoin-felt on point. "'I'll think about it'" is the best answer I think Zephyr could have given, since I don't think Zephyr could have responded with a wholehearted "yes" while still being genuine and true to his character. At least, not without a lot of development on his part. Which I am hoping we will see more of? Yes? :)