Good gb

Good

Good

Just awesome. But seeing the last ipdate date makes it less likely to get a chapter. *fingers crossed*

Flock yeah! Finally, reading a continuation, omg I so goddamn love you for this, it's amazing and cute, and hot and did I say amazing already? HELLA!

This is great, sweet and well written and I think it captures how they would act.

Amazing, one of the *cough* hottest stories i've ever read.

This is the best Pricefield NSFW story, I love how you write before of them because I could imagine both Max and Chloe saying these things in game. If you do decide to continue I look forward, this story is the best and hottest

Awsome chapter I love how detailed you are with this story. Hope you update soon, good job and keep up the good work. :)

So realistic and hella cute! I love this story so much!

Oh my gay this is...I'm done, it was beautiful and steamy and cute, most of all cute and there's an Alt-J title reference there right? Cause I could totally picture the whole thing with the song and it just make this perfect

damnnn son! that's was stella.
fit.

Ahhhhh! This was the perfect little smutty one shot :D The second person point of view really made things so great because reasons. ;) Also, loved how you still made things funny: "She has a sort of power over your body and she's loving it, the little shit." XD

Nice work :)

This was really in character, super sweet, and overall wonderfully written! : D Really hot and adorable smut, and I found your grammar to be great. Really, really loved this!