Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Ned beats Arthur what the hell

What the fuck is going on in this story. Your vague references and inordinate number of overly complex and overly dramaticized plot lines is so confusing that I would rather read a book about horseshit

Meh you’ve taken politics and conspiracies to far, it’s obvious that it’s all you planned to do but god damn nothing interesting is happening it’s like a roller coaster that is just a bunch of loops.

One consistent thing about fanfiction writers is that your all shit at drama

Your quite vague, also for fanfiction sure the POV story telling can work but you should try to limit it to a handful. In the actual books it was successful but it’s biggest fault as well. To much jumping can get quite boring and slows plot development to much.

Great you did a shot pairing with Sansa

Green sight weren’t prophecy’s but glimpses of the future to many people present it as prophecy’s. I really do hope this isn’t a Jonxdanny paring cause I’m personally quite tired of it.

Sorry not sorry but i’ll Not be reading from now on. You ruined a perfectly good fanfic with garbage. No can do. No wonder you stop writing. Fucking trash cousin fucker.

Ewww, please no disgusting jonsa

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I am wondering,... why didn't Robb blow the horn he had when they were attacked at the Fist.?

I thought that Ned sent Selmy to join Dany and bring her to her Nephew.?

Absurd ! Of course they are really his Aunt and Uncle.! Ned is after all his Mother's brother and the brother of Brandon hiis supposed father as well.! !

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