I was a girl in the village doing alright then I became a princess overnight now I've got to figure out how to do it right so much to learn and see up in the castle with my new family in a that's just for royalty. A whole enchanted World is waiting for me. I'm so excited to be Sofia the first I'm finding out what being royal is all about Sofia the first making my way it's an adventure every day Sofia it's going to be my time Sofia to show them all that I'm Sofia the first!

great job I've got an idea that you can do. You don't have to do it if you don't want to but it would be cool if you did because your so gifted. sofia successfully gets Birk Balthazar to fall in love with a girl named Marianne who fell in love with him and Marianne is a Caring, loving, strict, responsible, firm, even tempered, levelheaded, collected, composed, forbearing, well-intentioned, playful, fun-loving, warm-hearted, compassionate, talented, gifted, skilled, considerate, intelligent, nurturing, kind, decent, motherly, sweet, strong, nice, very understanding and reasonable, lovely, friendly, protective, stern, soft-spoken, insightful, wise, authoritative, assertive, no-nonsense, pragmatic, clear-thinking, sagacious, fair, genuine, over-cautious, perfectionist, overachieving, clever, good natured, amiable person

mmmmmm

wwooooooo

This is a great story.

I LOVED it! It was so real! BTW, I want to know if Sofia's last name is Cordova, because Miranda's last name is that.

Agghhh... It's kinda bothering me how... nonchalantly(? is that the word I'm looking for?) they are all making this. Especially Miranda. I thought she'd be a lot more conflicted about this. But it's just like, 'oh, Birk's here. I guess we'll just make sure that Miranda's not 'queen' until she divorces Birk and remarries Roland, since that's the legal thing to do.' Where's the passion? The heartbreak, the pain, the confliction, the DRAMA!? The TRAUMA!? I'd think it'd be pretty traumatic experience for everyone in general. I think the only one acting realistically is Amber, and everyone's telling her she's being rude. But for real. Everyone is feeling the way Amber is right now!

(takes deep breaths to calm down)
Like I said in my earlier review, I like the plot, the characters just need a more emotion, something I as a reader can relate to. One of the markings of a great story, is that it make the reader feel something. If there's not a lot for the reader to connect to, be it emotionally, physically, psychologically, etc... the story isn't going to shine like it could. And this story should shine! It's a great plot about a new life torn asunder because of an old life coming back to life! (if that made sense) There'd be tension, apprehension, confliction; and it's there, but only in a shadow. If you can bring those silhouettes to life, this story would be GOLD!

Oh dang! He didn't know! Nice one.
I must say that the story seems very abrupt. It seems like, even though you're putting some description into the scenes, it's like you're rapid fireing information at the reader. I think if you slowed your pace down a little bit, putting more palpable details in, and doing a bit more exposition in general, it'd make the story really pop.
I like the plot so far though.

My last review was stupid. Sorry.

Is Birk an OC because he is, though technically Sofia's actual father, he doesn't appear in the actual series

Hey Luiz4200. You ever read this comic series called Rogue Diamond by Pia-sama? You should read it. It's real good. It might even give you some inspiration ideas.

Wow! Amber was so mean! Loved the story though!

A wonderful ending to this story.

Caramba. Essa versão da Amber mudou pouquíssimo em relação a aquela Amber do 'Once Upon a Princess'. Duvido que essa Amber que esnoba tanto o Birk e o passado da Sofia pudesse fazer amizade com Ruby e Jade, como a Amber de 'Four's a Crowd'.

Mas fico comovido como Sofia guarda com carinho as lembranças de sua vida em Dunwiddie. Inclusive aquele pai que foi separado dela por culpa do destino, não dele.

Update soon!